All Comments on 'Clitty, Clitty, Bang, Bang'

From the title to the last word, a classic.

Love it. AAAA+++

CONGRATULATIONS. This reads and feels true, Congratulations to your editor as well. I love the imagery and the thrifty use of modifiers. You obviously know your way around a sentence. Ilook forward to reading more of your stories.

Add my voice to those saying it could and should be developed further. You created a platform that could go in so many directions, and to just terminate it when the tale could get so much more interesting is a real shame.

RI

using gadgets and cumming out on top. TK U MLJ LV NV

No, don't continue. This one was painfully enough.

Great story. A bit fast on the uptake so it really needs another chapter (or two or three). Can't wait to read more.

with one of the previous comments. This is a good lead in for at least one more chapter.

A chapter on how she saves his finances, the car, and proves the soon to be Ex, is not broke. A little revenge on the bookeeper would be nice as well.

Thanks for a great story.

So good I was left wanting more. Looks as if this story can't continue; but I hope you have more stories in you.