All Comments on 'Close Knit'

Any porn movie?

So good fucking your porn star mom, so hot.

That's not necessarily a bad thing, but the way you did it was. There should be some transition, such as a sentence or two to explain the change or a line of special characters (such as = signs) breaking it up into sections.

Switching from son to mom and back again was confusing... found myself waiting for the next change. Otherwise, a good start

Very Good story, but the swithing point of views with no warning got confusing.

Really erotic encounters with mom and son. Just one hell of a good fuck scene at the end.

I got lost and gave up halfway through page one.