by Antonio_y_Cleopatra
Very good writing quality. Please write another chapter - how far do the ladies push the envelope?
Most erotic story I've read in a long, long time. It's so good it's prompted me to write my first comment!
Friends, Eroticism,following their desires, It has it all, how long to the next logical step?
Best story I have read in a long while. Love the way the journey is progressing.
Please let the series go at least one more chapter.
there was really only one or two slips, you called Sharon Cathy once on the last page. Not a criticism though! I loved this story, I was starting to think I was a freak for wanting no swap swinging. I think that once you cross that line and break the sanctity of marriage it is hard to put the genie back in the bottle. The connections and intensity is really hot, as is the mutual respect and sharing. Thank you for writing this.
disappointed that there has not yet been any mate swapping. I'll just have to use my imagination for that - first a swap with them all together - later the couples meet separately to fuck the friend's spouse - then threesomes in all possible variations - then homosexual encounters - the whole nine yards of sexual experiences! Got erect just imagining it. I need to get laid soon! I'm heading over to the swingers site to check that out.
As much bonding as happened between these two couples, it's clear that more adventures await. Can a foursome be far away? A week-long vacation snow-bound up in Big Bear seems inevitable.
It makes your stories different. Swapping is cliché. This is erotic, romantic, and superb!
Wow! What a heat built in me as I read these two stories! And so well written to convey the deep love each couple has. That’s my kind of sex! OMG!!
Okay I gave you 5*again, despite the mistakes.
Who the hell is Cathy?!
And when is the next chapter coming? You know, the one where the girls get it on, spurred by their bonding?
Or will they just swap partners? Maybe save that for chapter 4?