All Comments on 'Close to Sis Ch. 03'

I'm glad to see you are continuing this story,it is great. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Absolutely loved it! I look forward to the next chapters in what i hope to be a series! I would love to hear how the love between these siblings develop :)

Can't wait to see where these 2 take it when she goes to College and he's still at Home.

it seems that almost all writers on this site enjoy leaveing the readers hanging what a waste of time

This is Sombras16, sorry for leaving you guys waiting so long, I never thought so many would enjoy it!

I'll start drafting up a fourth chapter, give me time :)

the whole series was rushed what you wrote in three chapters and a week or so should have been spread over months or years why rush things in chapter one he was so upset that he would have found a way to move out you need to slow down and keep it believable and realistic

I like it and think you should tell more of their story...how it continues, whether their parents find out, how they deal with that, maybe they move out on their own? Keep it going....

Love the story so far! Would love to see what would happen if sis runs out of bc pills. Would also love to see what kind of involvement Mom and Dad would have if they found out what's going on!B71F

i feel the best thing you can do is to totally rewrite the story building up the plot this was way to rushed. what you wrote in three chapters should be two or three times longer and be spread out over months not weeks. people do not rush into these things especially when they are so conflicted like he was. take your foot off the gas and do a rewite get a good editor to help you along.

I liked this story a lot and want to read more about this darling couple. Character development is flawless and the plot perfect. Danni seems to be the perfect sister to a perfect brother and I want to know both of them better. Their growing attachment and sexual attraction just makes the reader wish he was part of the picture. Thanks.

I really liked this story... so far. (Hint, Hint.) I can't think of anything else to say; the first commenter just about having said it all. I just felt the need to add my $2.00 (Inflation over $.02) worth.

I'll be looking for more, so please keep writing. ^___^

at best it needs a total rewrite slowing things down and spreading them out, you need more background and character development. or you could just delete it and stop writing as is you suck at writing.

Fine series, with a feel of reality. Sorry the promised sequels haven't appeared, but maybe not too late.