All Comments on 'Closer Ch. 07'

I loved your story. I had to go back and reread and refresh my memory but it was great.

The end?? Really?? Ecstatic that you updated but also bummed that it was the last part of this story so I also reread the lot (because I wanted to!) & decided that I can't wait for you next story. Cheers

I DO BELIEVE THE m&m GIRLS ARE DUE A STORY AND YOU DID BUILD UP A FEW OTHERS AROUND KIM AND JUSTIN SO MAYBE THIS STORY IS AT AN END BUT ONLY AS A BEGINNING

So happy that you reached a beautiful ending to this story I love Kim and Justin even though this is an end, I' am sure you can make this a beautiful beginning, don't forget to give us an epilogue on those two! I want to know if Kim finished college and what her and Justin's kids look like. And you forgot to describe the ring :( but aside from that love this story. Can't wait to see what you will write next!!!!! keep up the good work

i loved this story. i'm sad to see it end but can't wait until your next story. maybe its cole's turn to fall? was he justin's best man? i also agree with don't forget the epilogue:)

I'm speechless. This was outstanding....

I just stayed up and read this whole story. I loved it! I was so mad at Justin for cheating on Kim with Erin. I was proud of him when he stopped them from going further. No epilogue is needed, this story ended perfectly. You did a brilliant job with this story beginning to end. I wasn't sure if I would like it at first but I ended up loving it. All of the characters grew, even Mackenzie, that was a shocker. I just want to commend you on your story and your characters.

p.s. This review may sound like a ramble but it is 4:42a.m. and I am exhausted. I will gladly lose sleep for good storytelling.

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved this story!! So beautiful! I almost cried at the end. Please, Please give us a epilogue.

This is by far the best story I have read in a LONG time! Please continue with more stories!

Great ending to a great story can't wait to see what you write next thanks!!

It's rare to find first and everlasting love. Truly an amazing IR story. You are a great writer and hope your writing improves with It Ends Tonight! And yes, don't let us wait forever as good IR stories are hard to come by.

when Justin said that I flashbacked to Glees remix of the song ' I think I wanna marry you' lol I loved it

right here was a beautiful series on the cares of life and the frailty of love, yet having enough love to persevere and fight for it to stand.

Keep writing please :>)

This was a very touching story. I just loved it.

Thank you!

Maybe you can create an epilogue *batting eyelashes* please :)

I'm serious this story is so amazing and I would just love to see how you describe her and justin as parents and how their child/children would look.

Why the fuck were they engaged for three years

This was a WONDERFUL story! LOVED IT! :-)

Epilogue please!! this story was great.

I LOVED THIS STORY, CAN THERE BE MORE, I DON'T KNOW BUT I SURE HOPE TO THE LORD THERE IS! THANK YOU SO MUCH.

I hope you keep going! Anita? John?Maria? Cole and erin so many possibities! You are a great writer!

Read this again and loved it even more..

awww coooomee ooonnnn make a series !!! TIME FOR KIDS!! ima sucker for romance

I love this story!

This is a wonderful story. It made me so happy, I cried. Well done I wish I could give more than five stars. Keep up the good work

Great story, but it had a few errors. Justin’s mom’s name was Helen in previous chapters, not Karen. Maybe I missed it, but who is Adrienne that they were talking about? Also, there wasn’t an actual fire in the apartment, just smoke and a burned cake. How did the photos get burned?