All Comments on 'Closing the Bar'

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RhomanovRhomanovalmost 11 years ago
Nice Play

Short, hot, and changes direction just as you pull the reader in.

Nicely done.

Thx!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot

A quick hot story, plenty of openings for continuing over many chapters.

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