by Pelaam
You rock. I love every single one of your stories. Keep writting.
Another great chapter of this story. I love the way you are interweaving a little more of their everyday lives into each story.
Millie
Don't get me wrong, I love the architecture of your words- the passion and heat come alive with every visual description and breath of desire. But (and I hate being reduced to a butt man) I feel like the story line gets weaker and weaker. We need the time to let our own spent aperture recover while getting lost in the intriguing details. I love what you write, I just would like more to chew on:)