by nogratis
this hot story.
You need to focus more on the pleasure the hero receives from the sex acts. He needs to use his harem girls for his own pleasure, vaginally, orally, tit-fucking, anal sex, etc. That would increase the hotness of the story.
Don't forget he has to take his revenge on Cindy, and get his girlfriend too. Good story. Thanks.
If you ever decide to add any more chapters...!
This is a real good story, but the editing and proofreading is terrible. spelling and word choice errors are making it hard to read. Their and there are not interchangeable. filed and filled are not used in their proper way just as a couple of examples.