All Comments on 'Code Name: Blue Goat'

Your story was an amusing goofy read.Well done

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I have to admit that I don't share all of those fetishes, but this was so endearingly written that what didn't arouse me did make me smile.

Aside from needing an editor there's nothing wrong with this. Good work.

That was fantastic writing. It was more than just sexual fantasy. It had mixed parts sex, relationship, as well as the apartment burning down to break up the action. I was actually a little sad when I read the ending that Rachel had left and they would never see her again.

I'm not into everything you covered here but I thought that this was your best story - the plot had more to it and all three characters were interesting and believable (to whatever extent these stories can go without over-emphasizing the relative oddness of the situation). Excellent!

You destroyed it with the ending in a bad way.

Shame.

This is my fetish life don't like ending got me teary eyed good really good

Despite the obvious lack of proof reading and correcting of basic SPAG, this was a rousing story.