All Comments on 'Coffe House Pick Up Part 04'

I find the deep feelings interesting, this is a bit guilt which is how it would be. They seem like real people,

Maybe it is time to dump Sally. She is a bit of a drag now but otherwise it is great. Love how you tied into your other story "Mom Returns to Cheerleading" with Alison becoming a new friend.

This writer's ability becomes more evident with each chapter of this evolving story

I look forward to the next chapter and new adventures of this most interesting Mother/Son couple.

Their relationship is the ultimate in incestuous love and devotion.

It feels so real and I can relate to it as i'm just 32 and in love with a woman 9 yrs older. It's complicated as well and i like to read complex love stories like these while i'm away from her, to imagine what it would be to be with her forever.

Please keep writing.

Will you make part 05?i would love to see how it will end.

Wouldn't mind a follow-up story since it's marked TBC.

I like the adult take on this age old story and the changing face of an evolving loving relationship

Won't be together for too long she lied to him many times in this story alone and kept secrets from him a relationship will never work out like that you have to learn that most of us readers who read these types of stories wants to read about the connection and the unbreakable bond between the mother and son which has no secrets or lies for the mother is supposed to be the 1 woman in a sons life that he can always count on and trust the mom in this story has already shown he can't trust her if he stays he hasn't ever became a man and never will