All Comments on 'Cold Fire (Immortal Love Series) 2'

Got to admit i love this series!!! And now the mother is back!! so she didn't die...

please write more i can't wait to read how Ashleigh and David get rid of her or how they can beat the curse

tho you cant have David try to kill himself, they need to be together!!

This is my favourite story on this website, please keep it up, can't wait till next chapter!!!!

Amazing story with great characters and well-developed plot. Can't wait to read the next chapters and see what happens.

Am really enjoying the story so far it's a great premise and can't wait to see were you go from here. My only complaint is this chapter seems a little less put together than the first, I felt like there were details missing from some sections and hard a difficult time following the story at some parts. Otherwise keep up the good work.

Hey guys,

Thank you everyone for the comments and feedback on this story and the series as a whole. Unfortunately i haven't been able to write much currently and so i ask for your forgiveness; however, Chapter 03, Full Moons, is underway with many more surprises, adventures and romance from the much loved siblings.

If you haven't already done so please feel free to drop a comment whether good or bad (just helps me with what you want) or even send some feedback with your ideas.

Thank you all...

Literature_writer

I look forward to the next chapter.

you need to explain more of danellie's relationship to daivd i was kinda confusedby how it kinda it just came out of no where other then that good story

The premise started off great in the first story, now your jumping around without regard to your reader.

The girl danni, what is her story and relationship?

The house started out a hovel,now quite modern?

Let us hope in chapter 3 some of these things are cleared up a little.

good plot and characters but needs lot of corrections when it comes to grammar and flow...I love it though...you could of written a great story but you needed to take your work seriously like proofreading it and work with your flow...some things went all over the place and don't make sense like Danielle...why are they living in the same house?...at one point he seemed to had a thing for her when she was sleeping and he tried to kiss her...thought he only got his sisters heart...still giving you all the stars despite the countless mistakes since I happen to enjoyed reading it

Good story but it was never finished