All Comments on 'College Dreams Ch. 01'

Tis is a very nice story. I injoyed reading. It is a pitty that situations like that one do not occur often in real life.

Guys helping each other out can be a very good thing. Many are reluctant but will do it in right circumstances and person.

Your final paragraph should have been steamy. Instead you finish 'After that Jayden got dressed and left Henry's place saying goodbye, like it had been some normal day.'

WHAT ARE YOUR CHARACTER'S THINKING IN ALL OF YOUR STORIES? WHY?

"I'm kind of curious I guess." Jayden said. And Henry doesn't think or ask WHY? Is Jayden bi or gay? Has he done this with other guys? Does he like me?

in order to be believable, you need to continue the story. there's no insight into why this " straight" guy decides to screw around with another guy. curiosity just doesn't seem enough in this case. it just doesn't FEEL right. now if there are hidden longings for his classmate, if he is confused because he suddenly needs this man, that would be more believable. i hope you add to this story. it needs it, and you are too good a writer to just stop when a story is this close to being more than just adequate.

Please write another chapter or two; sounds like Jayden will want more fun with Henry