by sexually_erotic
I loved this! Please write more! What happened after thir vacation? Maybe her mother could be involved?
Damn what a hot and sexy story. I need to go home to my daughter.Miss her so much. Hope you really do like fucking your daddy. dp
Excellent writing for a first time writer. Originality and flow of story as well. Wish it continued...
Leider habe ich nicht jedes Wort verstanden, aber das war auch nicht unbedingt notwendig.Die Geschichte hat mir sehr gut gefallen.
These two stories were written more than six years ago, and I am wondering why you didn't continue. You have lots of room to expand this father-daughter relationship, and I hope I can encourage you to do so. You have a good, direct, style of writing, and there are no big errors in spelling or grammar. Parenthetically, I also am drawn to your photo in the bio -- at least I hope it is you in the picture.
Story was incomplete - 1st chapter just getting started when it ended. If you are going to write stories - beginning, middle and ending not just teasing us with the intro to the story.
dayuummmmmmmmmmmmmm. shes a very freaky grl, dont be tellin momma,first you get her brain then you have a moana!
I really appreciate all of the compliments. It's awesome. Please continue to comment readers!
have a daughter, I've now got a HOT, sexy blueprint I can use after about 18 years.
wonderful; sexy; hot. Its erotic to read such a hot slam bam incest sex story written from the girls angle. Nice and hot, I am becoming a great fan. All I can say is:"More please"
Enjoyed your story. Hope you will continue. She is a hot babe, and access to many others. Dad should be exhausted helping take care of others. Could even include college men and professsors
Excellent, and hot. I'm a regular reader (Ireland) and share your interest.