All Comments on 'College Roommates'

This story is IDENTICAL to one I read awhile back either here or on another site...

What a waste of time and space.........

This story was well written but 90% of my enjoyment is seeing all the build up to the brother and sister getting together but in this story we jumped right into them getting together and as a result it was a lot less enjoyable for me.

Loved how they ended up having sex... made it even hotter when she let him cum inside her!

College Roommates Posted 7/26/2013, and My College Sister Posted 7/7/2013 are the same story. Did you make a mistake in posting College Roommates or were you trying to sneak one past us?????????????????

Did the author actually attend any kind of school and receive an education? With all the distraction caused by so much italic text and use of "word ... word," and "word -- word" gives raise to wonder or ponder the above question.

I found the italicized thoughts a little distracting,and my usual comment about syntax applies as well. I liked the rhythm of the story though, despite the odd phrasing. I found it realistic. Slow burn stories aren't my thing, and neither are quick whackers. If it was smoothed out a little it would be even better.

You're half right, but if you we're to actually look you'd see it was him who posted the story you read before

Good story.

I am in love with my brother and I .. I wish.. My life would be like Becky's. I really want him. hell, I need him. I became so overwhelmed cause I was thinking...maybe one day we will be together too.

Wish I could give it a 10 star

I feel like I just got dropped into the middle of the story with no idea how I got there. It's so off-putting that I cannot get into the story. 1/5, not even a tiny bit satisfactory.

Do writers think big dicks and tits make a good story

Stopped reading at 38E tits

College Roommate is very well-written, with an excellent plot and good character development. The atmosphere of the story is full of emotion and wonderful romance; indeed, this story is really a romance story more than anything else. However, it would have a much greater "punch", and make more sense if it were written in the Romance genre instead of the rather bizarre and unrealistic Incest genre.

Not into cows. I like B cup perky tits. Otherwise good story.

This is the same as My College Sister. 1 star

very hot. Loved that they loved each other and made passionate love. Keep writeingits avery hot story.

Needs a conclusion, story left up in the air. Why do so many writers have the women in their stories have 38E and larger Tits, as the say everything you can't get in your mouth is a waste. 5/5

The measurements the author put down would make her obese, not just overweight. Unless she is extremely tall, more than most men, and the author didn't say she was.

There's a line between "not shaming overweight people," and "glorifying obesity." Obesity is very unhealthy, even just medically. I have to give this one a dislike.

Not much.too much crap!

She sounds like she's obese which is way overweight so much so no 1 would find it sexy 2 there was was too much iner thoughts talking going on no 1 needed all that the story had no build up such how it started and why you have had a back drop to it leading up to the date and so forth your writing needs work it was hard to get through the story ask someone to help you with how to improve your writing or take writing classes which ever you decide