All Comments on 'College Shags Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Name confusion

An ok tale, but got quite confusing right off the bat when you called her Tanya in one paragraph, then Ashley in the next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Try to make it less awkward

to read, that is. You're sentences are too polite to be talking about anything involving passion.

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