by echodancer
A "dream come true" vacation with a perfect ending.
Please please please don't tell me this is the end . I love this story. I want him to go find her and tell her he loves her. It just can't be over yet.
I truly enjoyed this series. You did a wonderful job with the imagery, and I would like to encourage you to keep writing. Your stories are erotic and tasteful.
Your writing creates an erotic world, not just my mind but my whole body enters into. The horseback scene was incredible - I almost came just reading it, imagining the motion of the horse thrusting Eric and Gina together - you could start a craze (or an epidemic of sprained penises!)
And I almost didn't make it to the strawberries and cream - you really know how to keep a guy hard!
This chapter continues (but hopefully does not end) a great love story involving Eric and Gina. However, this story belongs in the Romance category, not Erotic Couplings, because romantic love pervades the whole story. That this love is descriptive and explicit in no way changes that fact, but, on the contrary, serves to emphasize it. Five stars.