All Comments on 'Come Together - Bernice and Russell'

like all your stories!! thanks

With both of them being so attractive, they should make beautiful babies.

Maybe mum and dad will give them their blessings and they can have a simple ceremony with just the four of them and they would get married.

A good erotic sexy story, that makes for good reading.

Thanks for the story

another 5 star effort, LS...like all your stories, i wish they would never end...just go on and on and on...like love itself!!

keep writng and keep submitting!!

love,

david

Beautiful!

A sensitive writer, a story of love and lust... not just sex.

Love is beautiful and love with sex, is the maximum!

I would like to have a sister to love her...

Continue sharing your creativity and talent with us.

Thank you very much.

I do wish it had been a longer story. But, I still gave it Five Stars!

this was good but seem a bit rushed everything happened to fast this should have been spread out over months not days. this story is also in bad need of a second or third chapter we need to know she gets pregnant and if they move out together. the mother needs to do some explaining about her and her brother and we need to know how the parents feel about everything. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND PLEASE FINISH YOUR STORY NOW

we have a rushed story that needs to be rewritten to be longer and more believable. things are happening way to fast in this story it needs to be spread out over months not days

Rushed, jerky, if it was read aloud it would be in a deathly monotone, no emotion, just short, clipped sentences, no soul, no heart, just rush, rush , rush, no stars...