All Comments on 'Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter Ch. 03'

What a great story!! Wish this would happen to me!

Will he fuck Debbie too? Please write another chapter

Good, just one thing, he didn't check on the mom on the way out; was she still asleep?

looking forward to the next chapter

Oh yeah, another chapter ahead. So glad the author didn't stop this engaging story. So much potential for greatness.

I need to hook up the two girls for a threesome and don’t forget we need some anal

It was really good!! But as @onlysomeone said, the switching of names really threw me off for a moment

Whew, you took the heat up a notch with this one. And it's better and more plausible than the first one - by far. Mr. Matthews is certainly in an enviable situation.

BTW, 'protection?' I haven't seen any mention of any at all. There's merit to 'girl next door' but 'child of mine next door...?'

I'm looking forward to reading more about mom's seduction.

After reading your first three chapters, I think I have cummed as many times as he has.

Even hornier and romantic

So good. Next up chapter 4.

a very fun read and quite an adventure for these two. I loved it. looking forward to ch.04

you must fuck Debbie

I am disappointed that he did not have sec with Debbie. Hopefully in a future chapter?

"'Did you know that John is away again this week?' I heard Debbie ask me over the phone."

"I had a fleeting worry that Debbie was going to seduce me while her husband, David, was away..."

This is the kind of thing that really takes you out of a story. When authors can't keep the names of their own characters straight.

You need a proofreader

I was lucky enough to have a gf that loved to fuck. And I mean she loved it!

Any place, time, occasion. She was truly insatiable! Some times I really miss her and I wonder whatever happened to her . Oddly, we drifted apart. I never could remember her last name which made it impossible to locate her. Her first name really was Cindy. And she just loved sex!

more!...

Lonely Mommy teased him and got him all worked up and daughter got the benefits of his pent up cum in her tight little pussy, as the only thing better is if Mommy woke up and joined wanting her share and he said fine as long as you eat my last load out of your daughter's pussy while i fuck yours

hot...

Good premise again.

Sex is much too fast. Boom, cock in pussy.

Needs preliminaries. Foreplay.

Three stars.

I'm sorry once Cindy was asleep I would have returned to mom. Woke her up with a series of passionate kissing. Once permission was given, her dress and panties would be hung in her closet and I would have bring joy into this sad ladies life. I would have enjoyed every orifice in her sweet body.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Great story getting better each time I feel he should them both at the same time

Thank you

Very good! He bent the daughter over the couch that mom was sleeping on. Then, fucked the girl in her girlish teenage room. Excellent!

This is fantastic!! Mr. Matthews came close to fucking Cindy's mom, Debbie. Instead, he had another great time fucking Cindy! That's a great story. My cock enjoyed all the masturbating and juice overflow. Very delicious, I might add. Thanks!!! Will he finally fuck Debbie? Will he have a 3some? Fuck!! This is good.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

.

Getting really into Cindy getting fucked and wanting more. While her mother sleeps. Debbie has needs too.

It was good gave me a hard-on can't wait till the next chapter but you do need to make each chapter longer I think

Too long between the stories, you forgot Debbie was married to John, not David...

Oh, well still a good story...

Love this series - great fantasy. But, in the back of my mind I can’t help but think of all the trouble Mr Matthews could get into by fucking Cindy. Oral sex? Awesome. But actual fucking? Yikes. I have to work a little to suppress the thoughts.

Omg the lucky fucker, what would I not give to be up to my balls in that lush sexy 18 year olds cunt. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Good story, overall.

This line was very sexist: "She laughed at my jokes and in return I complimented her on her cooking, house and even choice of clothes"

"In return"? So she is only about looks and "woman duties" and that's all he can reciprocate with? Where is the good conversation, why can't she be funny and interesting .. etc etc

Wow great story with twists and turns -very hot, nice job!!!

Absolutely loved it. Literature should create a movie in the mind. Yours does this very well, thanks.

I Hope Cindy is on Birth Control .

Sorry Mr. Mathews didn't get a chance to pork Cindy's Mom before she got home and interrupted his plan. But she did provide him with a first-rate BJ and double-fuck session to make up for it. He is one lucky guy, but I still think he deserves to be able to show Cindy's Mom what a great (big) neighbor he can be for her! Thanx again for the Read.

It is always important to take advantage when the chance arises to get your end away(whether that be a neighbour or not).

What a nice man to instruct his neighbors daughter in the intricacies of sex. Too bad that he didn't teach good ole mom the same lessons.

How long will it be before he instructs her in the pleasures of anal fucking?

Thanks for sharing.

In the morning when Cindy visits Mr. Matthews her pussy is freshly shaved but that very evening in her bedroom she has a "matching trimmed bush".

Not trying to demean your work but a writer needs to keep things flowing correctly. I've read stories that have had the characters names change back and forth, making me think I'd missed something. Only to re-read it and find out the error was not mine. I write as well so I know it's difficult to keep track, especially if you only write pieces at a time. A good proof reader can help catch that kind of stuff if you are unable to find it during your own proofread.

Great work and keep it up.

Always throws me a little in the continuity when names are changed

Very thoughtful -- limiting our guy to 3 fucks, commensurate with his 42 Years, and saving Cindy's mom (and Cindy too) to another day. Very Thoughtful. Thanx for the continuing Read.

Should have made love to Debbie,she obviously needed it.As for Cindy he is going to end up getting her pregnant.

I hope Ch .04 is as hot as .03. Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

I foresee a threesome. Mommy and daughter. Interesting.

Such a good story. I rubbed my tight wet pussy Readjng this hoping he’d get to fuck both mother and daughter when the mom woke up

I absolutely loved it. Especially when he is fucking Cindy while her mother is asleep on the sofa. It reminded me of the time that my daddy was bringing me home from school in his car and I gave him a blow job as he was driving and got stopped by a state trooper for weaving all over the road.

I was laying on the front seat sucking his cock and told me to pretend that I was sleeping while the trooper was walking towards the car.

The trooper wanted to know what was I doing laying there asleep and my daddy told him that I was sick and he was bringing me home from school.

The trooper took his license and registration back to his cruser and while he was writing my daddy a ticket for reckless driving I finished sucking his cock until he shot his load in my mouth and I swollowed every drop of it finishing as the trooper was walking back to the drivers window with the ticket.

The trooper handed the ticket to my daddy and looked at me laying there with my head on his lap pretending to be asleep and I heard him tell my daddy that he had a great looking daughter and hoped that I wasn't very sick

I often wonder what he would have thought if he knew that I was coming home from school because I had morning sickness and I was 3 months pregnant with my daddy's baby and he was taking me home so he could fuck me some more.

must be Debbie next too , maybe both together , good stories

Since this guy is irresitable to beautiful women of all ages, I have to wonder why his wife left him. Perhaps he is as big a self centered jerk as he appears to be.

.. we all know by now that you have a magnificent, long, thick cock - no need to keep bragging about it at every verse end.

Stopped on page 1 of this part. Too improbable to be hot or entertaining fiction!!

Not worth my time to finish.

Greater teaser with the Mom can't wait for the end with hopefully a threesome after he beds her Mom

Add more chapters!!!!

More, more, more. 5*****

I wanna have a chapter or two with debbie first followed by debbie and her daughter.

1 chapter of milf

1 chapter of mother daughter donburi action (yes donburi is a real word it means egg and chicken rice bowl and is slang for mother (or chicken) and (egg or) daughter threesome)

1 Chapter epilogue where the potbellied husband dies suddenly from a accident or health problem and he marries debbie and gets a large payout from the potbellied husbands will after marrying the now widowed wife (OPTIONAL EXTRa widow chapter where he sexuces debbie) and through insurance claims.

From the crimson fucker.

Definitely needs more chapters.

As you've had Cindy imply that it's okay for him to do it with her mum, the obvious next step is for that to happen. Whether Debbie then suggests that he teach Cindy about sex so that Cindy doesn't make the same mistake Debbie did, is your call, but could then lead to a threesome.

Having David turn out to be an adulterer might be stretching credibility a bit too far, especially as he's away enough that getting rid of him isn't necessary to the plot. It certainly wouldn't make sense for Chris to hire a PI to follow David as suggested by one commenter.

My cock is asking for more of this story. Need to see Debbie catching Cindy and Mr Matthews fucking and finally joining in a fuck feast.

Needs to be another chapter. Cindy, Debbie and Mr. Matthews all together!

i have plently young college girls along our road, they all say Hi, Smile, Giggle and stare at my tight jeans to see i have a huge cock and they speak about their friends and boyfriends etc. but are not sure if they should party with an older man, so what they miss out on, some of their mothers have had a "fucking" good time with me and have said to their mothers', boy!!! your daughters' just don't know what they are missing with a thick 10 inch cock up their juicy tight pussies

I agree with all of the above with some twists...Cindy talks him into seducing her mother, then she joins them in her mothers bed...David does turn out to be an ass but Chris hires an investigator to follow him on a trip or two and they find out he is having two affairs - one with his other wife and one with a gay guy. Cindy then comes on to her dad and makes sure mom/Chris are in on it and catch him trying to force himself on/in Cindy. They tie him and a cuckold him with Chris and both end up pregnant as they planned to do this during their peak fertility cycle. Debbie gets everything in the divorce, David gets dumped by wife #2 and ends up being a bottom for gays.

I think Cindy should get Chris to seduce her mom, then join them. Later Chris finds out the husband is a total ass, Debbie dumps husband, and marries Chris, and the three of them, Chris, Debbie and Cindy get to fuck all the time. Think that would be a great way to do chapters 4 & 5. Later, maybe a couple of Cindy's friends need help too and she brings them in.

BTW, I am a subscriber but cannot remember my login and no way to get it and since my email is already used, I cannot make a new account.

How do u not c this Debra should catch them and turn it into a threesome

I´m not sure, but I think Cindy and Debby have planned seduce Chris, after Cindy has told her mother how Chris helped her as a lover man.

Waiting more chapters of this story, is hot and fun.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

I think that Deb should see them fucking and decide to join them and after the threesome both women find out that they are pregnant which turns him on even more

Very damned hot and erotic I hope their will be a 4th possibly even a 5th installment

I see plot #4... Well, dear old daddy's late/weekends working on his affair, he abandons/divorces Deb/Cindy who with the help of Mathews takes him to cleaners. Cindy goes away to college, while Deb languishes in depression. On college breaks Cindy enjoys Mathews but discovers her college love. She wants both of them to be happy and plots thee hookup between Mathews & Deb. Mathews discovers a yearning to become more than a self centered stud falling for Deb. Cindy comes clean about her tryst with her neighbor, causes a ripple but is overcome by mutual desires between Deb & him. KRD

I hope you have another installment in the works for this story. It is very good.

Now my mind is wondering if Chris gets the mother and or maybe a threesome with mother and daughter.

Does Cindy help Chris seduce her mother?

Or does the mother willingly seduce Chris and then ask him to also do Cindy?

Or maybe Cindy's mother catches her going into Chris' house and watches them have sex through a window and decides to join them or she tells the father?

So many ways to go from here.

Your doing great. More Please

I know it's been a while since the last installment but I look forward to a new one. Great work!

I've enjoyed how you've paced the story. There's a tease to what's just around the corner. I especially like that it's a two pager and I can finish the story before I cum.

I rubbed my twat so hard I came twice

This story has been illustrated and may be read at http://www.illustratedlovestories.com.

Love how Cindy is taking control and the guy is starting to flag. Would love to see her pressure him into group sex, maybe with her friend Jimmy and even some other guys. Let's find out where their limits are.

Maybe Mom can get some alone along the way. A threesome would set the hormones to working.

Great story, ready to see what you have them do next? Will Cindy have his baby?

I am so horny wishing Mr. Matthews lived next door to me right now!

Really like the series . Need to make more of them .

I've enjoyed this so far, but it would benefit from at least one more chapter.

Is Debbie next?? Do you have a story about them having a x??

Rona44

Would love to see a chapter 4 :-) The story is just too good to stop now!

Continue this

I can't help being turned on by the though of this sweet young lady repeatedly filled with semen. The thought of her pregnancy excites me and I would love for mom to join in and get pregnant too. I'm having trouble keeping up with his conquests, nuts drained.

gods that was hot...

wish I had neighbors like that, Mmmmmm

Am confused though, (on top of the 2 husbands) how did Cindy come over after breaking up with the boyfriend, get seduced and have sex before the parents came by at 11PM -- then the same day he arrives to talk with Mom in the evening????

The next segment needs to end with both Mother and Daughter getting pregnant by the Neighbor, then moving in with him to continue to be his subs, and Mothers of his children. Keep up the good work.

Would love to hear more and find out what happens next. Very fun to read.

was close

that was so hot you have to wright moer this one to see where it go's

Another brilliant story from you, I'm soaking wet from reading it, keep up the excellent work.

Please Continue the Story.I would like to see where you take it. Thank You. I have enjoyed reading it.

This is definitely a hot story, packed with strong emotions fulfilling sexual needs by both neighbors. Truly a win - win love story with discovery, passion, and wild sex excitement.

A follow up chapter could include Cindy going off to college and Mr. Matthews following through by satisfying Cindy's mom, Debbie (on "a good neighbor basis") as she desires his full sexual attention. From here on out it will be any one's imagination for the grand finale!

Thoroughly enjoyed the characterization of Cindy's desires (her rejuvenation for sex) rekindled by Mr. Matthews patience and loving touch (in spite of his own desires).

Oh yes, I also agree Mr. Matthews took a wild chance in the living room with Cindy and her mom. At that point, I would have probably lost my erection to limp noodle( at least momentarily, if not a short heart attack!), UGH!, WHEW!, GULP! what next! LOL! That same incident almost happened to me and my girlfriend as her mom and dad had gone to bed.....and yes, later, her mom returned to the living room (for a clear shot inspection on us) where we were making good progress but still, fortunately had our clothes on. Whew! that was as close one!

Yes, definitely looking for more adventure in this story

My best to all,

Domfrancisco.

Good gods this is hot. When he is fucking her with her mother passed out right next to them ...wow. As much as i feel for Debbie and know she needs a good fucking I'm not sure how i would feel about them possibly getting together and I'm glad you didn't go there in this chapter.

I fucked my older, much-married neighbor for one wet, hot, summer when I was 19. I was home from college - and he worked at night. As soon as my mom left for work, we hit the sheets. He had the biggest dick, and he made me cum again and again and again.I learned more from him than any man I fucked since. This story brings back memories. I may just give him a call.

Great story, very hot. Also, glad you resisted turning this into the obvious mother-daughter three way that everyone else seems to immediately gravitate to in their stories. Would love to see a relationship develop in future stories. Again, awesome work.

Another sequel please where you do Debbie. That is helping your neighbour. Debbie needs some comforting sex.

and it could be costly.

omg my pussy is driping wet from reading this series please add more

DO give us more. I love how hot Cindy is for her neighbor.

Was just getting into interesting times. Would Momma Bear give it up and would she share with her Daughter.And what about Poppa he might be out of shape but if he is spending a lot of time away. He has to have some kind of Recreation.

More please these stories are hot I hope you keep writing

Please please continue the story I can't get enough