All Comments on 'Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter'

Hades help me. This was HORRIBLE

GET A FUCKIN PROOFREADER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"boys go too fast", dude proceeds to rush things. Dumb story.

Absafkinlutely loved it wanked myself dry

Write another chapter where she come's back and get's real fresky with the guy.

Loved this! Thanks!

Amazing job

Wow,had me leaking pre cum big time.

I came with the first insertion..

Many thanks!

I would love to read more adventures with Cindy and her Mom. More stories please!

Great story good details when it came to getting that good pussy hole real good.

Next chapter ,please. AAAAAA++++++

Having a similar experience added to the lustful pleasure of reading this story. I got as hard as could be. I really enjoyed it. Very hot!

When does Mr. Matthews have an affair with Cindy’s mother?

Cindy was a willing participant, and her relationship with Mr. Matthews will strengthen her character. She will be more streetwise and confident in her personal life. However, (spoilers!) Mr. Matthews should have been content with Cindy's attentions and adoration instead of rocking the boat in sequels damaging their relationship. Otherwise, Cindy would naturally resume dating boys her age, only occasionally returning for random, less-frequent trysts with Mr Matthews. Cindy would sneak in a sex session with Mr Matthews when she has a new curiosity, a bad date, when a guy she really has high hopes for turns out to be a dud, or she is just sexually frustrated. Their relationship could conceivably continue throughout Cindy's early-to-mid twenties on the down low. Cindy's confidence would bring her and numerous friends by Mr Matthews house for Cindy to tease him while her friends are completely oblivious of their relationship. A quick, suggestive flick of her tongue, a tantalizingly quick flashing, or quick groping are all techniques Cindy would employ in the company of her physically alluring girlfriends. Cindy would always find an excuse to be dressed sexily and scantily when interacting with Mr Matthews, enjoying flirting with her secret liaison. Actually, it would be through Cindy's confiding in a close girlfriend about her relationship with Mr Matthews that would lead to this friend wanting to have sex with him with Cindy's permission. Still, this is a hot story!

What a great story I nearly cum when she gave him a blow job

Very nice!

Oknowitsdevolved into a cliche.

Relaxingandseducingafrightenedgirl-asantreal CSsaniva wiuld know- requiressift musicanda full body massage on a firm bednoti over ara cluttered kitchen table! Warmed-up fragrant oil with some lavender essence would calm her and reassure her she’s in good hands

I loved it and as an older man who spends time with a number of younger women like this I do enjoy it so much

Brilliant! 6 Stars!

Love the story. I’m quickly learning that most anonymous posters in here are simply complete assholes who have nothing better to do than criticize somebody else. You must have pathetic lives yourself if you have to tear someone else down to build yourself up. Just STFU.

Great story, gave me a raging hard on. Will have a wank after wring this

Lmfao at the comment about the next chapter being her intro to anal!! 😂😂😂

But in reality, anal is not okay. It’s filthy and disgusting and the ass is exit only!

Wow, some of the comments here...they act like Mr Matthews is some kinda freak who goes around seducing young girls all the time; and without a thought to health or pregnancy issues.

It sounds to me like he has been "fairly" celibate since wife left...and I think he was really nice about how he "took his time", given the stated time constraints...

The 'anonymous' fictional conversation with Cindy's friend "Steph"...wow...makes them both sound like stalkers!!

Great start...on to read the rest now!!

Five Stars!!!!!🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋

A nice story. Interesting that the MC is willing to risk the neighbor's daughter getting either an STD or pregnant. Such a thoughtful neighbor...

Great story , well written , next chapter should be her introduction to anal .

What if she gets pregnant?

Mmmm made me so wet I had to slip a couple fingers in...

Great story and it moved right along at a good pace, I hope there is more to come.

Great premise.

Marvelous story.

Five stars.

Oh yeah! Mmm!

This was one HOT story. But it went from nothing to a three-ringed-circus and all the way in a matter of too-short a time. To go from I didn't like it, to HJ, BJ and fucking...well, it was just too fast.

But I'd LOVE to have it happen to me.

"Now I was interested, and I thought 'lucky Mike for getting a feel', but out loud I said 'Why do you think it didn't feel right?'" Neighbor perv has it all wrong. When a woman says sexual contact doesn't feel right, asking her why she *felt like* it didn't feel right can come across as negating her instincts and lead her to doubt herself.

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"I could see her wet pussy clearly, which still looked tight even after her earlier orgasm." What is this nonsense? Since when does an orgasm leave a vagina loose and gaping? Ridiculous. The author needs to learn about women's anatomy. They are clearly lacking in experience and/or common sense.

Hi all im Lucy and i so like and relate to the story. I had a crush on my dads friend since i was a little girl and in my teens dreamed about sleeping with him and him being my first. Well he didnt become my first but i did sleep with him and we became lovers for almost two years. The sex we had was just amazing even though he was nearly forty years older just his touch had me soaking wet. Being naked for him and learning a lot of new things was hot and although he wasnt my first he was the first to cum in my mouth and the first i had anal sex with. Our adventures were often quite daring and being naked outdoors i really liked the thrill of sex outside. My first 3sum was with him and a friend of his and it was really good so much i asked had he more friends to bring and take care of me. Every time is as good as the first time he dicked me and i loved when he would collect me after school and go to his house as i got to stay naked and have lots of good sex. I still do have sex with him occasionally and love going home with dick juice leaking into my panties after being with him

Was that a real story

I love it

I wouldn't mind getting a dick rite now just like that..fck how I want my hair to be pulled while getting to be fck from behind..fck I'm wet jst thinking about getting fck like that

Thank you for putting one of my dirty old man dreams into words.

Two months later after Debbie pries it out of Cindy that it was that nice Mr. Matthews that knocked her up her father and uncles pay him a visit that guarantees his days of seducing sweet young things are finished, permanently.

Beautiful to read

flash to Cindy's room after going home as she chats with her gf.

Cindy: omg he totally bought it!

Steph: No way!

Cindy: Yep I knew he was a dirty old man lol I mean it was sooo easy, I wore that short skirt and I had my blouse unbuttoned to show my cleavage and my strappy come fuck me heels. I played the "poor little girl" to the T, I mad sure he got lots of cleavage looks, and I could feel his eyes on me as I gave him some good looks of my short skirt and legs lol

Steph: Was he "bulging"?

Cindy: OMG yes! I could literally see it growing and bulging in his pants - what a horny bastard lol

Steph: Details girl!

Cindy: He feel for the whole, "the guy I'm dating tried to get to 2nd base but I don't want to because the one time I had sex it wasn't good" story. He thought he was slick, rubbing my shoulders, telling me that it was the guy's fault and with the right guy it'll be better. So I let him massage my shoulders and he snuck a kiss on my neck and of course I let him. lol the dirty old man wasted no time after that sliding his hands to my boobs, I let him of course and let him know I liked it.

Steph: lol you're such a slut!

Cindy: Yea I know lol - he actually was good with his hands AND mouth :-). He went down on me and was really good at oral! Made me cum <giggle>

Steph: was your pussy freshly shaved?

Cindy: Smooth as a baby's bottom lol and he lapped it up like a pro - better than most older men.

Steph: So was his cock as nice as you thought?

Cindy: OMG yes! And you know how I love holding a nice meaty cock - which is what he has :-)

You know how I love to play the Miss Innocent, so I was pretty happy when he gave me the "now it's time to return the favor" line, and told me to get on my knees. You know how it gets me going when a guy gets me on my knees!

So here I am, miss innocent, on my knees, playing like - what do I do now Mr. Matthews, looking up at him with doe eyes. So he pulls it out and it's even better than I imagined! I took it in my hand and started stroking it, I thought I might give myself away but I couldn't resist feeling his cock and I wanted sooo bad to just start sucking, but the game had to play on, it had to be him "teaching" me.

I gave him the old, what do I do now? I've never put one of these in my mouth lol and he "taught" me to put it in my mouth and it'll come naturally. I can imagine what was going through his head when I pulled his foreskin back and started sucking. These guys and their obsession with conquering women, I love it lol

Reminds me of all those times on our beach vacations with our parents, being the sweet innocent girls with mommy and daddy and the boys who would get us away from the parents to "take a walk" on the beach and end up under the boardwalk and them working like hell to get sex from us, what were we like 15? You want me to touch it? OMG I never did that! Well ok, just for a little.

What? You want me to put that into my mouth? Give you a blow job, OMG that's what sluts do, No I'm not gonna do that, isn't jerking you enough? Well ok I guess I could just kiss it once. Yea your right it wasn't bad, What? Lick around the head?

What's that drop on the end? Taste it? Lick it up and lick all around the head and make it wet. Well ok, but that's it! Was that enough now? Yea it didn't taste bad, kinda salty I kinda liked it. You want me to put your cock head IN my mouth? I know I licked all around it, yea I guess it's the same, ok I'll do it.

What the fuck! You pushed my head down on your whole cock! I didn't say I would do that! No it wasn't bad, you want me to do it some more? What's blue balls? well ok I'll do it some more but you'd better not come in my mouth, promise?

I loved looking up at them and asking if I was doing it right and of course hearing them say it was perfect as they push me back down on it, and just waiting for them to tense up and start to come and feeling the inevitable pressure on my head as he thrusts up and cums in my mouth.

How funny making like I'm gagging and chocking and calling him a bastard for cumming in my mouth lol - telling him he'd better not tell anyone knowing he'll be bragging to his friends as soon as he could and seeing him and his friends looking at me and whispering about me on the beach the next day.

Little did they know that me and you sucked our first cocks when we were 13!

Steph: Yea I remember those two older guys took us driving when we were freshmen, it was the same routine but for real! I can't believe they got us to do that with them, we became sluts that night - you in the front seat me in the back sucking off these hunky football players. Loved how the word got around and all the guys started sniffing around us lol

Cindy: But we digress, I gave him a nice blow job and he recovered pretty quickly and gave me a nice fucking! He'll want more, I'm thinking of finding ways to give him blow jobs when my parents are next door and when we have time fur letting him fuck me!

Steph: I love it, maybe we can get the perv to do me too!

Liked it.

This is an awesome story. It reminds me of a young woman I once had myself.

Thank you.

It as pretty good. Both got off the right way,and it looks like more to come.

Wow that's awesome I was entranced

Cindy 18, so she masterbates. I’m sure she even fingered herself and slipped the hair brush handle inside herself time and again. She was looking for more experience that evening! Next he’ll take advantage of her virgin rosebud. Go down and tongue punch her ass and puss while finger banging both until she is begging him to take her! Ever so gentle to begin with, but then back and forth in both holes!!! Yes, she is tied face down in his bed and spread wide….

Nicely done. Cindy needs to grow her confidence and then return and control Mr. Mathews.

5 Stars. Wondferful story, nicely paced and somewhat believable situation. I hope there will be a part 2 with Cindy eagerly returning.

I liked it, fun to read but I am an older man who would like this to happen. but a fun read

Great fuck! Did that to an ex girlfriend long ago

Not bad, some of it was really hot, some of it was ‘meh’. Author really overused ‘young’ and ‘small’ as adjectives. And Cindy was a little too easy to seduce, especially if she just ditched a date for being too aggressive.

Lol. Sounds like he was played by Cindy

I don't know if an 18 YO girl would just give it up to a much older dude just like that, unless she had a crush on him, wich could have benn the case, but it never was mention, so I don't think so, this seems more like abuse, non consensual. Then again, it's just a story, a fantasy of sorts.

I loved the story, with the exception, I thought there should have been a much slower build up, a nice back massage first, then some slow small erotic touching to get her used to the touch and feel. I just personally think that would have added to the over sensual overtone to the story.

I thought it was good, just use a thesaurus or something next time. You said pussy so many times that it became distracting with the amount of times you said if. I thought that maybe in time they'll stop saying it, but no, there it was time and time again.

Good writing doesn't make up for your older male character being a pig. It seems more likely that the young girls, (was Cindy really 18?), reactions were the pigs made up fantasies to justify his dispicable behavior ignoring her protests and cries of NO and STOP. Here's a better ending: Cindy opened the door and rushed into her mother's arms, sobbing out what had happened to her. Her father's rage was instant as he stepped through the doorway and slammed the pig's head into the table the pig had fucked his daughter on before calling the police. Turns out Cindy wasn't 18 after all. The pig now shares a cell with his new "boyfriend"!

Good story, well told. Well written.

Essentially perfect all around. This will still stands as the best of the series.

Definitely a male fantasy if someone started touching a young lady like this I’d assume she would freeze up any consent isn’t fair cause he’s known her for awhile so he’s just a groomer

Excellent! I wish the parents had been delayed more.

Taking her in, yes. Letting her talk, yes. Even holding her, yes. But forcing himself on her using the excuse that sex can be joyfuL without her asking or consent? NO. Gave it a 3for good writing, On second thought, that's too high..

Great story.

I agree... Nice story, lots of potential, but moved too fast... Should've stopped after the oral on her, then let her bask in it, hug her, kiss her, lie with her naked, let her discover at her own pace. Then have her return later for more...

@BobbyMike. Agree, young women (of all ages, actually) should take proper precautions, to protect themselves. In my many unpublished stories (or story parts), I bring-up lack of protection as the naive virgin Christian women, preparing to give their good-girl virginities and Christian innocences to the "bad boys" or nonChristian men they see, rarely consider the long-term effects of their men spurting their potent seed deep into their utterly unprotected pussies, which sooo wanna be fucked....

Its awesome. I felt kinda jealous..

Excellently written. Extremely erotic. It is the duty of all "older" men to teach young women how to have great sex. I would have eaten her pussy before fucking her though. The time constraint of having to watch the clock was a good subtle pressure, raising the tension, to move things along. This story could be expanded into a novella showing the further adventures of Cindy & Mr. Mattews as he teaches her more & more with each of their further encounters. Ten chapters & 2000 words could be written easy.

Mmmmmm fuck yes. I imagined that was me. You just taking what you want. My tight little pussy getting fucked hard by your huge cock. Mmmmm x

Mmmmmm fuck yes. I imagined that was me. You just taking what you want. My tight little pussy getting fucked hard by your huge cock. Mmmmm x

Great story every as fantasy reminded me of when exgf Lil sisters hoped up at my door flirting with e

MMmmm,... Author used lots of info to update us all..!!!! Thank you..!!!

Overall, quite, uh, entertaining. And also kinda hot. But if the girl was truly burned by a bad first experience, he needed to slow things down and not skip so many steps. Forcing her legs apart? Bad move dude. What about some heavy kissing and exploring her exogenous zones? Maybe a little edging? Then let her explore his body, his hot zones? To go directly from her first orgasm to stuffing his cock in her mouth is pretty lame. Let her feel his chest hair, his muscles, his legs, and then hesitantly touching his rod. Then gently stroking it, sliding her hands around the tip, lightly sliding down the soft skin of his length, getting comfortable with that and then learning to give a hand job and get comfortable with the sight, the small and the feel of his equipment. Getting a bit lost in finding her way around his body as he continued to stroke, suck and lick her to keep her aroused. Instead, he took a few minutes to massage her shoulders, a kiss on the neck, a few licks on her breasts, a few on her clit, shoving his fingers into her, and off we go. Then she owes him a blow job? What a creepy wanker.

YUMMY..!! Excellent story..!!

A very endearing and sensual story. It's nice how he comforted her, then taught her how sex is really to be enjoyed.

Wow!! Great Story!!

Lovely story how he restored her confidence in men and learned the joys of sex well taught.

When i was 18 i loved how older men relished in fucking me. I enjoyed how he took his time and really enjoyed her body.

Hot, does she not realize what she really is to him, just a tight hole to use. I felt like that reading it

Very hot. It’s always amazing and sexy when a man takes advantage of a woman and makes her his slut. Loved it. Would have loved for him to fuck her ass also.

Sorry I found this distasteful and an abuse of power taking advantage of a young girl. It is no wonder women are wary of men who can only think of their own gratification.

Must be American!

nice story

I thought that this was an interesting Story, a guy in his Late 30's or Early 40's who is desperate to get some and feel alive by making Love with his Neighbor's Daughter.

Imagine if you did another story or 2 like including them going somewhere like the Beach and Robert drools all over Cindy in a White or Hot Pink Bikini.

Also that Cindy confesses to her Parents that she loves Robert with all her Heart and they accept. After High School they become a Couple, throughout her time at College they date and later they get Married and start to have a Family with a few Kids of their own. !!!

I thought it was an Interesting Story, a guy who is possibly in his Late 30's or Early 40's who is desperate to get some by making love with his Neighbor's Daughter behind her Parents Back.

Imagine if you did a 5th Story like an Epilogue, like where Cindy & Robert confess their Love for each other to Cindy's Parents, throughout College they date and afterwards they have a few Kids of their Own. !!!

WHERE DIS U SAY U LIVED?

First rate. Looking forward to the continuation!

Neighbour’s daughter or better friend’s sexy, seductive, young daughter can be fucked with utmost pleasures and infinite lust. T, a friend’s daughter ignites fire in my loin, her very thoughts give me instant erection, the hard long thick hot throbbing cock wants to enter her tight pussy again and again. OMG 💃💃

I only need two words: REALLY HOT !!!

Great story! ...regardless of all the haters. Your story made me wet and when I returned home to my husband, he reaped the benefits! Now PEOPLE it is a story. PLEASE go elsewhere with your poor rules on life. YOUR LIVES MUST TRULEY BE HORRIBLE!! EVERY WOMEN has always wanted an older man to take them. I relived my own experience while reading this story of when my neighbor allowed me to be "The Seducer" and take him. I was not a virgin. I had been with too many "little boys". When I decided to to take my neighbor, who was, and always has been, a gentleman, he made me feel sooooo much like a woman. I was 18 but had lived next door to them for 5 years. He and his wife had watched me "mature". He wife taught me how to wear makeup so that no one knew I had makeup on. My mom tried but Cortney took her time and explained "why". I babysat their 3 children. Spent the night when they were out late and took care of the kiddos in the morning. NEVER did he push himself on me. I spoke to Cortney about my poor and frustrated times with boyfriends. She always told me that she was lucky that she had the opportunity to be with someone older who took their time and waited for her to be ready. The more I write, the more I believe she actually set her husband up for me. I guess that makes me love them both even more. Now married myself, with my own kiddos, we are all still great friends. My parents still live next door and when we get together, great memories come rushing back. Picnics and holidays have always included everyone. As for my kiddos, soon to be teenagers, I hope that we have raised them well so that they know to ENJOY the development of their sexual appetites.

Fantastic! Well done. I look forward to reading about more of their trysts :)

Five srars she is one hot Cunt

stroker...

Personally I thought the story was great. I am an older woman who has never had the pleasure of a lesbian experience.I would love to find a hot 18 year old girl to lick her tits. And then her fresh young pussy. And her stick her tongue deep in mine. I might even want my husband to partake. But I get her slut pussy first.

I would LOVE to have a Yummy little neighbor like that as sadly they are all old nasty bits who are unhappy and make their own hubbys miserable

I was taken by a neighbor and contined

Great story would love to read more as the chapters progress…

I liked this, but something that kept distracting me was the repetitiveness of the word 'pussy'. If you used other words sometimes or didn't directly refer to it the words would flow more. Twice in one sentence is too much, especially surrounded by more sentences with it in them. You don't have to go all 'love canal' but could say, the hot tight feeling of her, instead of her pussy, I could feel her muscles squeezing instead of her pussy squeezing.

Great storey... loved it

Awfully glad this is a series! Absolutely great story with plenty of build up and truly loving gentle sex. A well thought out and written story. Look forward to reading the next chapter. I would love to see more stories on your list! I thank you and your Muse for sharing your vision and talents.

I liked this. I hope that teaching gets some kinky aspects in next chapters

I cant tell if this is a fantasy youve had or if it happened. Good story 👌

I honestly love it when older guy take his time and lick my pussy and finger it wet before fucking me and stretching my pussy with his big dick

That’s great story