All Comments on 'Coming of Age'

I have really enjoyed your writing. I hope to check back soon and see that you have concluded it :o)

Got my attention but a bit short for my tastes but well written, keep up the excellent work...

Donna

This was my first submission. I wasn't sure how long it would actually be once uploaded in their format. It was 5 pages on MS Word, so I was hoping it would be around 2 on here. I was wrong. Now that I know, I will plan accordingly.

Thanks!

~Khrystyne

I would first like to congratulate you for having the confidence to submit to literotica. But why is the story so short?! If you would please be so kind to submit more page next time it would greatly be appreciated.

I liked the beginning of this. It's a little short, but I look forward to seeing where it goes.