All Comments on 'Command Performance, the Next Day'

This story started off sounding quite "usual" but soon displayed and intriguing edge. I liked the inclusion of the age old vampire story and I look forward to the further development of the combination of both sexual interestanf the vampire situation. Keep up the good work.

It would be interesting to read more to see where you're going to take this story. Especially how the reincarnation part is going to play out and whether or not they'll try to kill his creator.

I REALLY like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But the last part.... was so totally of and wrong!!!!!!

Wow ok this is garbage. On to the next fapping mission!