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by TonyDowse

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great stories

I have read many of your submissions and they are just grand. From time to time I got so interested in the story line that I actually skipped thru some of the erotic bits! What a waste.

Your writing is wonderful and inspite of the above, the descriptions of the erotic sexual activities and phantasies are marvelous and sexually arousing.

I'm going back to read the rest of your work and hope you continue to submit these adventures of your various well hung, beautifully breasted and tasty cunted heros and heroines, respectively

Kezza67Kezza67over 16 years ago
Critique not criticism

I have read a number of your Novellas, and thoroughly enjoyed them. I have to agree with your own ideas, that background is most important. It is only with background and characterisation that the reader can actually visualise the people involved. With that advantage the erotic scenes are read with 'colour'. Too many of the stories on this site concentrate solely on the sex. Sex between cardboard cut-outs is of little interest. I have more of your submissions to read, and look forward to many evenings of warmth in their company.

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