All Comments on 'Commercial Company'

All the years on road for me, it "RANG" true. (Don't I wish??)

A great tale, that isn't afraid to tell it like it is. Thank you.

Eaxcellent story and a much better ending. Well written.

Your story touched the romantic in me. It helps me dream of the romance i have never had.

Beautifully written story, River Otter! Wonderful details. Wonderful ending. Thanks for writing this readable, romantic, sweet gem of a story. Good job!

Great story, loved it a lot. Keep writing and you will have a fan an avid reader for life. Looking forward to your next one.

This was a fantastic read, RiverOtter! thank you for sharing a part of your imagination with all of us....I look forward to more!

I was kinda wondering how I might be in Johns shoes and it then dawned on me---all that sex would have killed me.

Great story. Great love.

Wonderful story! Hope you will write more.

Boyd

I loved the real life personas you placed in the story. How someone in their early 20's could fall down so hard, and a stroke of luck, then disaster, and luck again could have her rise to the top. The lonely trucker, the waywards hooker, it was like Pretty Woman with a delightful twist. Thank you for a delightful read, and I look forwards to your next story.

Victoria

Rune_loa@hotmail.com

loved the story from begining to end.

This story is a real gem. I enjoyed all of it. Wish I could find a Jennifer. (my 35 year marriage will be officially over this summer). I'll have to get me a semi-trailor to improve the odds.

soul mate. Mine is 21 years younger. She was married to a man that did not want children, she did. She met me and fell in love with me, then separated from her husband before she ever even dated me. Then she almost immediately moved in. Now some 14 years and two girls later we are still deeply in love. Age isnt the question, finding your real mate is. She is and has been my other half since the day she saw me, says she knew the minute she met me. It took me a bit longer looking at blue eyes and blonde hair, lost in lust, but I finally realized who she was, mine!

A nice warm-and-fuzzy-feeling type of story, though I'm surprised Anthony didn't try to take her back by force--if he's as possessive as you characterize him to be, than why wouldn't he gather up a posse of questionable characters to take her back and then try to set fire to John's truck while he's still in it, or something equally dastardly?

A great effort nonetheless. I would have preferred a bit more lactation--the common conception is that it's "gross" for grown men to drink it and like it, but his attitude is refreshingly new.

And it's spelled "Jekyll."

I did not know whether to laugh, cry, cheer, or get mad during this story. It was great. You had ALL the emotions going, some simultaneously. Will there be more about John and Jennifer? Hope so...possibly some more romantic stuff about them in California, what with conceiving all those babies..and ALL THAT BREAST MILK!!!!!!

he put a "Fruitliner" into gear? Had a LOL over that. Never driven one. Never even seen one. That was a pretty good one. Still smiling. Thanks.

Just a truckers way of saying Freightliner

this confirms some of the stories i've heard about truck stops......i enjoyed your story....thanks......

I think it would be better if didn`t use [ I say] all the time . maybe A editor

would help to make your tale flow better

One of the best story i have ever read and love every line of it. Such a happy ending. Hope this ending is eternity. Nothing is worth more than a family.

the beginning was so dark and negative.

Have read this several times, covers all the bases.

Thanks for your effort, five stars

All people have the right to find love and happiness, even the company ladies (I don`t like the name they are usually given).

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

I love damsel in destress stories, and this is one of the best. Five stars!

Nice tale, funny players and full of heart. Well done!

This is a wonderful love story, full of drama, passion, and tenderness all the way through, romantic storytelling at its finest. Five stars.

Well written love story, just got to love it when a story like this has a happy ending. Well done 5 stars

So well written and the sex scenes were exquisite.

Cheating someone who isn't out to cheat you is heinous. Hope that trucker enjoys Hell.

A wholesome story, practical and sad with the cheating trucker but that's reality. The betrayal was gruesome given her naive character. Fiction coz of his out of character traits like loved her out of the blue, becomes benevolent unlike the initial page, and this gives it the fairytale touch. Too bad its fiction though.

Great story!! Wonderful ending!!!