All Comments on 'Computer Geek Ch. 01'

Nice first-encounter story. I really enjoyed both characters, and hope you turn this into a short series.

I enjoyed this beginning and I like where the story line could potentially go but I would love some more character physical description!

HOPE THIS HAS BACK STORY BEFORE IN MOVES FOWARD, BUT A GOOD START

I'm glad you're back! This is a delightful story. You have created such such awesome chemistry between this two!!!

Your stories always have me grinning and this is no different!

Can't wait for the rest of it coz i know how brilliant it'll be

continue with this story I swear I'm going to die!!! This way a really good start !!! PLEASE continue!!!

fantastic start i'm drooling for more!!!

I was excited to see more from you and now I'm excited to read more

I'm so glad you're back! You're my favorite author on this site and I love your stories!!! (especially anything involving shy, geeky girls and dominant males :)

Yay! New story! :D look forward to reading it

I'm extremely glad you're back! How I love every single one of your stories!

interesting start :)

nice sexy buildup! cant wait to see what happens next!

Must be erotica, all right ;) I real life, he's up for sexual harassment, maybe jail time.

An unusual but intresting start.

Looking forward to the rest.

But guys that force themselves on a woman are ignorant and need to be taught a lesson. Perhaps she could use the web to find a woman wrestler to show him what it's like to receive uninvited attention.

A wonderful introduction.

I'm looking forward to the rest.

It is a fantastic start for a story I definitely cannot wait for more!

Not enjoyable, she very obviously wasn't into it and told him so but he still went ahead, add in that he's her boss and you have yourself a lawsuit in the real world.

Unless you're writing for a non-consent/reluctance audience I think you missed your mark, yes a woman wants to feel wanted but that was not want, it came across as slightly intimidating instead. Pressing yourself on someone who is unwilling isn't sexy, it just read uncomfortably.

Shame really 'cos some of your other stuff was good, but I don't think I'll be reading on with this one.

he's/she's just stupid. she definitely wanted it. she's just insecure which in certainly not uncommon. excellent start. love your work.

What??? Nobody's wet yet!

Characters are like real people?

Good start to a late night reading this.

keep this great story gooinnggg sqhead

"We will," they assured her as they noisily hurried out the door as if they were worried the strippers would change their mind and keep their clothes on. Just wonderful LOL

Good start

great start! a little awkward with him saying he was going to fuck someone the whole weekend. he doesn't seem the bad boy type to just blurt that out suddenly. I like how she called him spoiled when it comes to women, because it sorta sounded like it. I'm super excited to read the next chapter!

It's captivating! Makes me want to read more.

The one on sexual harassment in the work place.

Even a computer geek would recognize his behaviour as out of bounds and actionable.

Maybe there is some plot here that I am just too thick to understand. I will see i]a plot emerge in the next part.

✔️✔️✔️Great start

I LIKE THE STORY AND FIND IT INTERESTING THE WAY ADA HAS STARTED OUT. INTELLECTUALLY, KATE AND SCOTT SEEM TO STAND ON EVEN GROUND. SCOTT DOES NOT SLEEP AROUND AND HAS HIS EYE ON KATE. AND BECAUSE OF THIS, HE IS VERY AWKWARD IN HIS APPROACH. AS FOR THE THICK HEADED, READ THE FIRST TWO SERIES OFF THIS THREE SERIES SET. IT WILL HELP YOU. READ ADA'S BIO. YOU CAN LEAD A HORSE TO WATER, BUT YOU CAN'T MAKE IT DRINK. LET'S READ SOME MORE.

Since when is sexual harassment erotic?

Despite her protests, and the basic power differential, he just walks up, kisses her, dry humps her, and bails.

I'd contact HR immediately. Failing that, the police and a lawyer.

Very rape-ish vibe.

Good start, with a promising future, will dash to part two, hopefully Scott will fullfil the promise of a big cock. Not perfect, I could pick faults, but why, I am here to be aroused, not critical, nothings perfect and I can't do better myself.

Might be a bit too much in today's work environments but an interesting start. Well written and great dialogue as expected.

She forgets he's behind her? A woman forgetting her boss is there after just making very suggestive comments? He's way to aggressive for a boss (sexual harassments), and she's way to stupid and non-reactive in anyway toward his advances. The dialogue just does not play today. But I've noticed that the portions I've read of your stories, all of the women are highly analytical and almost detached from the sexual situations they are involved with. They are constantly finding some small detail of non-erotic activity to focus on.

Anon doesn’t know any programmers, lol. I forget when people are behind me all the time... I’ve gone weird in code review mtgs with customers bc I’ve been lost in code bc I found yet another small mistake, etc. A many women are that analytic; myself included. Odd comments from Anon. That being said, I could be Kate. That’s my brain at work... I even used to have a weird crush on a guy that was majorly out of my league, but it was ODD. Hah, next time @ me, as they say, lol 😅

To InsectQueen from Ada Stuart:

So true! It takes another programmer to know the feeling of complete concentration over pages of code, LOL. Besides, there are important things in life that hot men, right....? Uhm, or did I miss something, LOL

Sorry, but you don't have to a programmer to understand that kind of concentration 😁 I could do that with reading. Don't even necessarily hear when talked to.

Just starting to read your stories. I'm quite impressed so far. Reckon I'll be here a while before I move on.

As a gray beard from when compilers were actually visible to most programmers, I claim that if your code is missing a SINGLE bracket, it will fail to compile, rather than run incorrectly.

I could believe that adding matching brackets in the right place would fix an error.