by Ada Stuart
Love it! Great story! Who will give in i wonder! Cant wait to see what happens next! Please more and soon! Thanks!!
awesome awesome awesome! I love your stories. Can't wait to see Kate give in to Scott's seductions. The overwhelming amount of flowers and chocolate was hilarious. Update soon.
But please dont take so long in submitting the next chapter!!! I cant wait!!!!
What the hell is wrong with these people? You barely have any comments and you're getting very little compared to usual! I think you deserve at least over 10 comments, because you are such a talented writer! I hope you post the next chapter soon! And more people need to comment! You deserve all the comments.
Oh my god.. This is hot in a teasing way! I can't wait for the next chapter :) Great work
i half expected you to be bombarded with comments...great work as usual, don't have us waiting too long !
Scott has to go slow! But he knows it already .... I love a man who do the "proper" courting thing. Hee Hee Wow! Great story.
scott scott, why are there no men like you nowadays? pursue some more scott. :)
things are getting more interesting.... :)
slow is overrated! sometimes you just need to follow your gut and go after what you want!
Great story so far. Can't wait for more.
Like a fine wine or chocolate, passion should be savored, not rushed. So should stories. I’ll continue reading, but I’m curious as to why she is so insecure and why he is so mad about her. The characters need more development by this point.
I decided to give Ch 2 a try, since this series got such good reviews. More sexual harrassment. He literally locks her in his office. She does absolutely nothing to encourage him, he gets way too physical, and just like Ch 1 it has a very rape-esque vibe.
I decided to give this a good chance after chapter one, but this was way over the top, a Monday morning apology, followed by a request to take her out for dinner would have been enough for any woman. I am not sure that I want to continue.
"way over the top
I decided to give this a good chance after chapter one, but this was way over the top, a Monday morning apology, followed by a request to take her out for dinner would have been enough for any woman. I am not sure that I want to continue."
Ah, yes, I know what you mean. This was written in 2010, but after MeToo, I admit I would have written it differently today, or at least included a warning at the beginning of the story or placed it in Non-con instead.
This is actually one of my stories that has been plagarized and placed on Amazon. But I intend to rewrite it and post it there myself soon, so I really appreciate your suggestion so I can improve it.
Ada
In some ways she's giving almost as much as she's getting it from Scott in the verbal sparring. Not politically correct today but it's a story and it's 10 years old now. Usual standard, no complaints, 5 stars