All Comments on 'Computer Geek Ch. 05'

Get an editor ASAP. Many sentences/pargraphs are ended with notihing, a quote mark("), or a coma (,); this isn't proper.

Great chapter, please don't make us wait so long for 6.

Editing comments aside, it was great. Please don't make us wait so long for chapter 6

Can't wait for next chapter.

just let go girl!!! kate should loosen up. hahaha.

can't wait what karen had decided to do. write fast please. :)

Who cares about what's proper I only noticed a few grammar errors. A editor will improve your flow but I don't really trust them the last three editors i've had haven't done such a great job.

Great chapter can't wait for the next one :D

Thank you. It has been a while since I have read more of your stories! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Please let me know when you write more - am looking forward to reading all you have have published.

Pure joy!

She runs hot and cold too much, a cock tease for sure, gets herself off then treats him like that?

She says things are going too fast and what does he do? He moves things immediately too the bedroom; I mean the bathtub.

Is awesome, cant wait to read more. I can relate to both. A full frontal assalt can terrify the best of women. again this is very near one of my experiences. Loved that girl heart and soul. Moved to fast..still haunts me.

SO KATE HAS A BAD HISTORY WITH THE LOVE LIFE. IT SEEMS TO ME THAT KATE THINKS SCOTT IS A BIT OF A CREEPER. HIS STRONG ADVANCES SCARE HER. IF SHE DID NOT ALREADY HAVE THE HOTS FOR HIM, SCOTT WOULD HAVE NO CHANCE. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. BRAVO ADA

She keeps telling him to slow down and he behaves like a 15 year old. Does he not understand the difference between love and sex?