All Comments on 'Condemned Ch. 04'

by SumOfAllThings

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pixir32178pixir32178over 14 years ago
YAY! YOUR BACK

I've been waiting and hoping you would continue writing, in any of your stories. I love them all. This was another great chapter hope the next comes soon.

FatBottomedGirlFatBottomedGirlover 14 years ago
yum yum

glad you're back. really enjoyed this chapter. thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Finally!

I've been waiting forever for you to continue this story. And you delivered once again. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow.

I read the first chapter of this story and it was SO familiar.

Then I realized I had read it before... probably several months ago. Where have you been? (:

It's really good though. I hope we get another chapter in less than a month.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
twist

I love your stories, but condemned is my favorite. So happy for an update, and what a surprise at the end. Always looking forward to more :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
love it!

please more more more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Finally! :D

What a place to end it! I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great Story!

You're a very talented writer! I'm torn between what I love more; Condemned or Defiance! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please Finish!

I loved both Condemned & Defiance! Please finish them I am so sick of getting into a story and then never having an ending. I need the rest of these stories! Please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Come on..

Please Finish!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
brum

so vampires dont make too much of a change to brum then?

love it and can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
PLEASE

Please more more or finish it please. Like I keep coming back to check this story, like this story is so better than many stupid vampire stories. Except this one isn't stupid at all, it's like if that was actually happening. I simply love this story. I know you probably have a busy life and all but please can you finish this one and the defiance. PLEASE. I BEG.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

This is an awesome story! There better be more submissions or I am gonna be extremely upset! lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome!!

Great story, love your perspective. Though you have a few grammatical problems, and it's odd that he's British and he says mom not mum lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love your stories

I'm English and I say Mom. lol! I think you're watching too much tv. Not everyone talks like the queen!

Love the stories, keep em coming!!!

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