All Comments on 'Condemned Ch. 06'

Awesome! Another chapter! It was great, thank you very much. Waiting patiently for the next.

to see this chapter! Loved it. Damn, this is a good story and I can't wait for the next chapter :)

I could not believe it when I saw it. It was like Xmas morning. Updates on both stories 2 days in a row when you usually only update a few times in a year. OMG I'm so happy!!!

Its been too long.cant wait for the next chapter.

I loved it, and I was so happy to see you updated. The only thing disappointing was that it was only a little more than 1 page. I hope you update soon again! I love your stories so much. 5 out 5 stars.

Just finished reading all the chapters and now Im wishing for more:D

Great job so far.

I really love your imagination^-^

This is one of my favorite series. Please make your updates longer, and more often if you can!

I hope he forgives M they are ment to be! Couldn't stand any more drama between them. They were getting so close. What the hell would he have if he left.

I'll try not to yell at you to go faster, but i just want to say that i normally hate vampire stories because they are so cliched and twilight-esque, but you've made a unique and beautiful story here!

Take as long as you need, i would rather have a good story drawn out then a bad story rushed.

Great emotional depth! I'm hooked. I'm having a hard time imagining how this could end well, but I'll definitely keep reading. :-)

I love this story so much! I agree with the previous comment. Don't let people rush you. You're an amazing storyteller. The pacing is right on point. Never boring but also never too much thrown at us. I love vampire stories but I really feel like this one is unique. The only thing I'm worried about is, do you have an ending in mind? Please don't just string us along. Thank you for sharing your work here!

Hi all,

Cheers for all the feedback. I'd like to apologise for taking so long to update Condemned. I'm concentrating on an ending for Defiance at the moment but i'm still working on my other stories and I definitely have an ending in mind for Condemned. Please don't think I intend to abandon anything. I'm just a bit slow getting things out ;)

Such a disappointment to get to page 2 and only have a paragraph left! TT-TT This is an amazing story, the writing has improved since the first installment and I can't help but daydream about the next chapters...

Thank you, SumofAllThings, I love the mood that returns in this series: Conner, scared and realizing there's worse to come, and Michael, trying not to harm but doing so out of necessity.

Take your time, the quality is worth it!

I think the darkness of being in the vampire world along with the feeling of being an exclusive among them has been brilliantly portrayed by you. After twilight, we all have sorta forgotten the sheer fright at being with vampires. You've brought it back very nicely. I think you are doing an amazing job at it. I am waiting for the next chapter..

Will you be posting again soon? I'd hate to think you've left Lit. You're stories are amazing and you have real talent! Please, please, please don't leave us without a conclusion to your stories! It happens far too often!!

great story....i really hope you continue it

cannd

this is really gud nd im really hooked plz give me more D:

I really wish you would continue this :(

too slow... buy i like the story and the characters