by Pussyrider
Your excellent writing and descriptive language ALMOST overcomes the incredulity. A virgin with no lesbian expreience could surely not be this bold and apparently talented. The story in spite of this flaw is still very erotic. Keep up the great work just don't try to get TOO MUCH innocence packed together with sexually aggressive and knowledgible behaviours. (please pardon the spelling I'm so addicted to spell checkers that I really don't even try that hard anymore)
What a wonderful sexual creature she is... inexperienced but naturally sexual.