All Comments on 'Connecting with Julia'

I really liked how you detailed the characters involved, where they come from and also the situations interweaving between the game & the play that you both had privately under the table. The game sequences turned a little too convenient but if you could've added some "nearly getting caught" thrills then it would've been even more exciting. I expected a little more detailing on the play and what was going through your mind as you watched her during the play. Also, you kinda hurried through the end. Nevertheless, its an exciting read and a great beginning. I hope, Julia gives you more such opportunities.