All Comments on 'Conspiracy Theory Pt. 01'

... but you introduced to many characters/names in this first chapter. I'll hope you do not want to introduce a lot more of them. It's a little bit confusing.

StarScream's earlier stories were VERY interesting and unique to the site. I'm always taken by a good woman assassin. With Conspiracy Theory, he's raising the stakes by introducing a more complex set of characters for a longer story. Good job. But it requires more from the readers. I suspect it will be worth it!