All Comments on 'Consumed Pt. 03'

that you updated this story. Please keep it coming. I can't wait to see what happens and how everything turns out. Rick is one sexy beast. (I thought I'd just throw that in there.)

Great story, thanks.

As with so many stories here written by Americans, I shake my head over the food the characters eat - "grilled cheese sandwiches and carrots"? Grilled cheese sandwiches (very unhealthy) seem to be eaten almost every day, while macaroni cheese (a main dish in most countries) is eaten along with all sorts of odd things, and fruit and veg seem to be very much an afterthought . . . I start to worry about the health of our heroes.