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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WHY?

....?

Tearsofsorrow2Tearsofsorrow2over 15 years ago
No need for why.

Typical wife with no respect for herself. And she should have absolutely none for the wimp she married.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Tommy

Your a bigger fool than you think you are, and there is more to come, glad i'm not you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great!

Well done. Enjoyed it very much.

forfun44forfun44over 15 years ago
Great Read!

Loved it! Very arrousing. To bad others wouldn't realise it's just a story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
He has his own paid escort for his clients.

Would advise he divorce her as soon as possible. Can still live with her but you dont want her on your medical insurance, or the companies for that matter, and you damn sure dont want her married to you when she is named in divorce suits or police records.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
you sure do have a screwloose

Do you expect us to believe that the couple is with his biggest most important client in the world and when he gets beeped he runs off. You so called writers will stretch a plot to hell and back to get a wife fucked where the husband can't see it...man oh man...Marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

Agoodman952Agoodman952over 15 years ago
Good Story

I agree with forfun44. It's time to lighten up! This is a story, a fantasy and if it was lived out without anyone being hurt better yet. If you don't want to read stories like this DON'T ! If you would rather read stories about the sexy aspects of monastic life I think the church lady has a web site. As for the rest of us who enjoy exploring the limits of our sex lives and pushing out the boundaries we enjoy this type of story and will continue to do so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent Story

This is a good story, well-written. I agree with the two readers who obviously know that this is a story, a fantasy. It's not supposed to be real. You morons that have to inject your views of morality into an EROTIC story site are idiots. Don't read the damn things if you are so uptight that your ass squeeks when you walk !

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
So Easy To Write But Then

Sick absurdities are always easy - they have no reality or life like situation so who couldn't write such a sick extension of a want without reality as yours is the only yardstick.<P>

You actually could do better for a larger more appreciative audience by including less freaky male humiliation. Weak self cucks pimping out their ho's are a dime a dozen requiring no imagination or talent.

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Scrrewed

It's too bad that you didn't have to look up Tommy a couple of months later as your belly started to grow...As instantaneous sex like that probably did not have a condom available to use, and being married for 11 years would have left you still breedable....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Once a whore, always a whore .....

and absolutely no plot line what so ever! It sucked!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
A very helpful wife who knows what to do

I like to read about women who know what their pussy is for, and how to use it. Who are more than willing to help their husbands business. If it takes fucking the client to keep his business, then a wife should use her pussy for business purposes. You can't wear a pussy out with normal fucking and as long as she enjoyed it, then there is no harm, no foul. Thanks for your very sexy story...Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good story!!

A wife doing what she can to help her husbands career. Just as it shoud be. She benefits from the money her husband makes and if she can help him along she needs to do that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Are there no MEN here, I mean real men!

Men who would not and will not take such shit from his slut wife? Surely with the 80,000 plus people on this sit esomeone has to realise that doing something like this while married is wrong. She is awhore nothing more nothing less imagine sitting at home waiting for her to come home that night or that day or the next what sort of life is that? Well I guess if you live this life style or you want it to happen then you will love this story and what it is trying to say. personally i couldn't careless if they all court something, some sort of STD would be good.

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 15 years ago
Businessman's Wife Gets "Busy"

Good, hot revenge sex -- while helping hubby shmooze his #1 sales client! This tale proves umpteen adages: Power corrupts. An ambitious husband can be a perfect asshole to his so-called beloved. Power is the greatest aphrodisiac (Henry Kissinger). A good woman does what she needs to, including revenge sex that earns bonuses in the sack with Tommy Tithead. And, importantly, a guy who knows how to tiptoe around a gal's chest, thighs and midsection wins Baby's gold medal.

CJs_HubbyCJs_Hubbyover 15 years ago
Great Story

Hope to read more from you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
genie is out

and genie is not going back into the bottle.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very Sexy Writing

Wow! Loved the story as told from the woman's point complete with all the emotions and feelings. You teased us at the begining - you have more to tell - please do and hurry!

FunseeeekrrFunseeeekrrover 14 years ago
Two words

of advice for further romps. Thigh highs! I switched when they first hit the stores and never looked back. I have always hated panty hose and think they can be the partial cause of female infections. If you are going to screw in a car, then thigh highs and tap pants for underwear works marvelously.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
New standard

Guys- the sooner we start sharing our wives the happier we all are.

It just makes your marriage sexually charged beyond belief. It is the ultimate win win - nothing is better than having a wife return home with a used pussy. It is no longer a secret lifestyle for a few- even my 80 year old mom know about hot wifing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wonderfull Anon, just wonderfull !

Right down and to the point. You should be a Writer....

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
BS: Blaming her desires on alcohol.

Alcohol is a depressent so, in the middle of page 1, I stopped reading and rated it 1*

AnnatartywifeAnnatartywifeabout 10 years ago
Nice start

Very sexy start and I will be reading more x

devilspydevilspyalmost 10 years ago
Cuckold leaves wife with a wolf.

As a stud who fucks married women all the time, I must say that cuckold should have got the whole story. Not that you cheated on him, not in any way. He told you to do it. Wanted you to do it. Almost forced you to do it. So really this was not Stan's fault or yours, cuckold dreamed it up and wanted it. Look at his reaction to what you did tell him. He is fine with you picking out a hot stud and fucking him as long as cuckold knows about it and gets all the details. A smart wife like you should easily twist cuck boy so he eats you clean when you get home. Or better yet, have the lover in your home so cuckold can eat fresh hot creampie.

OnethirdOnethirdover 6 years ago
Him again

Ah, the eloquent anon again, spreading good cheer: what a total douche bag. Nice story, with good build up. The wife is smart- she gets her husband to make it very clear what is expected of her, so there is no misunderstanding. Then, of course, liquid courage take care of the rest. 5 stars to help balance out the previous idiot...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Will

This sounds just like what happen to me to start with. After you have a few kids and been married awhile and another man looks at you like he could eat you up. No matter what it makes you fill good. My husband likes to show me off too. I have to work hard to keep from getting to cubby.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love it. Period! Gave you a 5/5 = 100%. In my book, this story is very erotic & very realistic. ❤!

The scenario is totally my cup of tea & then some more: wife fucked by husband's business client, or husband's boss, or her own boss for that matter. It can be very erotic when another man fucks your wife; when that man's decisions can affect your ability to pay your mortgage that is next-level erotic (I'd say it is overwhelmingly kinky!)

The storyline was very intelligently conceived & masterfully crafted.

I will read other Chapters of the same series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Help Make the Sale, Dear!

My wife and I enjoyed this story a lot. We can’t wait to read the additional chapters. I remember when I had the “This is in OUR best interests, honey; he wants you" talk with my wife. I continued, "What man could resist a beautiful, sexy, young woman like you! And he is a very important client of our company.”

She got the message, and, as she found the guy attractive, it was no hardship for her to fuck him. That was when we were both 22 years old and just out of college. Now, we’re 35, have teenage children, and my wife is still in demand by my clients!

Yes, she has also been mistaken for a working girl when she was out with a client and me. Also, I often get an urgent phone call and have to leave. So, my clients eagerly agree to make sure she gets home safely.

She loves the sex, she loves being whored out, and I love it that my wife is still so sexy all the men want her. During our marriage she has probably spread her slender, sexy legs for about 100 men!

We live in a convention town, and as she has shared her exploits with some of her married girlfriends, and they have decided to do likewise. Now she firmly believes that every married woman's pussy should be shared, for financial gain.

She says that being a simple hot wife is not that attractive to her. But taking cocks in her married cunt, to secure a lucrative business deal is exciting for her. The day she told me that, I bought her several pairs of custom printed panties with $$ signs stamped on the front of them. Of course, she only wears them for me, but it certainly heats up our sex life.

Now, that is hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is an A+ story: ★★★★★+ (5.25 = 105%, "above expectations.")

The story is very very erotic.

Actually the scenario is totally true to life.

There is something awfully kinky in situations where a man whose decisions can affect your family income aggressively flirts with your wife and you know he won't be satisfied until he fucks her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY.

Quote:

"... You think that's okay?"

"Sure, let him. Touchy-feely anything. It's just playing. It's not like real sex. I don't mind. You shouldn't. Just don't do anything to piss him off, please." He leaned closer and took my hand. "He's important to *us*, sweetie. His account is the bigger house in the better neighborhood that we just moved into. And the new car you want."

I'm stunned. How far does he want me to go with this, I wonder? ??

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This Loving Wife story deserves a

5+ (5.25 = 105%, "above expectations!")

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

CONVENTION TOWN GIRL CH. 01 is a very very erotic story. Some users give it a 5+ because it really goes "over and above"

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excerpt from Ch. 1 of the story:

"... The client asked me to dance, too, and being a good corporate wife I accepted. Then a slow song came on next, and we stayed on the dance floor. He pulled me fairly close, his hands on my hips but not quite too fresh. The guy is an important client, so I don't want to draw any attention to it. I just ignored it. He's done more than that several times in the past, anyway. I mean, he's an attractive enough guy, about ten years older than I am. It's just that, well, I am married, and my husband is right here."

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story resonated with me, it hit me on a deep emotional level. ❤💚❤💚❤+ (5.5!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I agree with the previous comment ("This story resonated with me...")

In my book this wife sex story is erotic, kinky, and even romantic.

The heroine of the story, Jen, and her husband Tommy have their own business. Their most important client is a man by the name Stan.

Essentially the series is about Jan, Tommy, and Stan.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5.0)!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved (❤) it! Erotic. Kinky. Short but sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My kind of wife sex story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

👍👍!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

💚

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

❤💚❤💚❤ (5)!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Imaginatively conceived and masterfully crafted. Very very erotic. The storyline is based on a myriade of true events.

In my book, this is a 'must read.'

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

5+ (105% ☆☆☆☆☆+ "above expectations.")

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Irresistibly dirty! In my book,

it 's a compliment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

👍👍! ❤.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

💯

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5.0)!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

5.0 = 💯% (-☆☆☆☆☆) 👍👍!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I'm copy pasting one of the comments I liked

Anonymous9 months ago

This is an A+ story: ★★★★★+ (5.25 = 105%, "above expectations.")

The story is very very erotic.

Actually the scenario is totally true to life.

"There is something awfully kinky in situations where a man whose decisions can affect your family income aggressively flirts with your wife and you know he won't be satisfied until he fucks her."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

5.p = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟)!

❤❤

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent, 5.0 = 100% (♡♡♡♡♡)!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excerpt from this story.

Quote:

Stony silence for a minute. Then he whispered in my ear, conspiratorially, "Tell me you aren't enjoying it just a little bit. Turning on another man. A rich and powerful man who finds you extremely attractive."

I didn't answer, but just sipped my drink to think about it.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I am copy pasting another user's comment.

Quote:

Anonymous, over 1 year ago

This is an A+ story: ★★★★★+ (5.25 = 105%, "above expectations.")

The story is very very erotic.9

Actually the scenario is totally true to life.

There is something awfully kinky in situations where a man whose decisions can affect your family income aggressively flirts with your wife and you know he won't be satisfied until he fucks her.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excerpt from the story.

Quote;

When Stan went to the restroom later, I told Tommy that he was taking some liberties with his hands. "So?" he said. "Let him. Please." I was more than a little surprised. "Honey, this is my biggest account. It's no big deal. Just a little playing. Let him."

"Do you want him to feel me up?"

"If he wants to, well, yes, I want him to be able to do that."

"You want me to *let* him feel me up?"

"Yes, sure. I don't want to make a big deal over it."

...

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Jen is a lo ing wife and a keeper. Period.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ (5)!

If Stan were my wife's boss she would shed her inhibitions in short order.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT!)

Quote;

I slid up and down on his cock, moving it in and out of my cunt, slowly, long strokes, he was frantic, sweating, gasping, he wanted so desperately to come. "Fuck me, fuck me. Shoot inside my cunt. Please. Shoot. Squirt in me. Give me your come!" I felt his cock get super-hard, and tense, and he lifted his hips, and he shouted, "Agh! Oh! Oh. Oh, oh."

...

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Jen is a keeper. Full stop. Period.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excerpt from this story (a vanilla one!)

Quote:

When we got back to the table, Tommy was away, in the men's room, I guess, and while Stan and I were talking, he put his hand on my thigh, too. Right around the hem of my dress, on the skirt, then down on my nylons to my knee, then back up. Casually, he hitched the hem and went under the skirt onto my thigh. Thankfully, Tommy returned just then and Stan moved his hand back down to my knee.

End quote.

[☆☆☆☆☆ (5)]

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wife left alone with client, seduced and enjoys it.

Loved it. My kind of wife sex story.

5.0 = 100% (☆☆☆☆☆).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The cucks will fawn over this like stink on shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

5.0 (100%, ☆☆☆☆☆.) VERY VERY EROTIC.

Very well written. One can feel the erotic tension in the air, and it keeps increasing.

I was blown away by this story, so much so that I imagined Stan was having his way with my wife.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I AM COPY PASTING A USER COMMENT WHICH I REALLY LIKED.

Quote:

forfun44 - over 14 years ago

Great Read!

Loved it! Very arrousing. Too bad others wouldn't realise it's just a story...

End quote.

THIS IS A FIVE STAR STORY.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY.

Quote:

I let him drag out of me the details of Stan's dancing with me, and feeling me up. I told him that Stan even fingered me in the car before we drove home. Tommy went nuts. He loved it. He was hard in an instant, ripped off my t-shirt and jumped on me with very few preliminaries. I was horny as hell, too, I told him, from being felt and kissed and fondled and eventually finger- fucked. We both came like horny beasts.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

My wife and I totally enjoyed your story, especially the fact that it was narrated from the wife’s point of view. It was a real slow-burn as the wife began to understand, little by little, what was expected of her in order to keep the husband’s client happy. That reminded us of my wife, it took her a bit of time to internalize how business worked.

The husband slowly broke down her resistance by telling her how important this client was to them keeping their new home, to her getting a new car, and to keep the business coming in. Also, the client slowly broke down her resistance by being irresistible! He knew how to seduce her. It was like a one-two punch and she caved by dropping her panties for the client! I started my wife out with some of my most attractive and seductive clients – she loved fucking them. Once she put out for them, then she easily gave it up for my more mediocre clients – that was for business.

We live in Scottsdale, Arizona which has lovely golf resorts and a few casinos. In the winter months my clients from the Northern states, like to visit to play golf and gamble. My wife and I participate with them in both activities: she’s cute in a golf outfit and sexy in an evening gown at dinner and at the black jack tables.

So, from the first of November to the first of May, my wife is quite busy. For those six months she usually takes a different client’s cock just about every weekend. Sometimes there are two-somes. So by the end of the season she has usually fucked about 30 guys. In bed she shares with me all the juicy details of her spreading her sexy, slender legs.

I call her, and she calls herself a slut, whore and hooker – she loves that. Our sex life is better than ever.

Again, we loved your story! Tomorrow night we’re going to read the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY.

Quote:

For the next week, every time I looked up at him, over breakfast or dinner or the newspaper, he was staring at me and smiling. And he'd grab my ass or my boob every time we were near. And we made love with renewed vigor every night for a week. He loved that horny, sexy night at least as much as I did. God, imagine if I had told him the whole story!

End quote.

I LOVED THIS STORY AND THE SERIES. Gave you a 5- (4.6 = 92%, ☆☆☆☆☆-)!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

MrMsScrewloose:

You are a duo of excellent sex-story tellers.

I gave you a 5*****!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY.

"... Then a slow song came on next, and we stayed on the dance floor. He pulled me fairly close, his hands on my hips but not quite too fresh. The guy is an important client, so I don't want to draw any attention to it. I just ignored it. He's done more than that several times in the past, anyway. I mean, he's an attractive enough guy, about ten years older than I am. It's just that, well, I am married, and my husband is right here..."

★ ★ ★

I strongly believe that it doesn't count as cheating when a married woman has sex with her husband's major client. (The same goes for her own major client or big boss.)

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Jen is a loving wife and a keeper. Full stop.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Excerpt from the story.

Quote:

... while Stan and I were talking, he put his hand on my thigh, too. Right around the hem of my dress, on the skirt, then down on my nylons to my knee, then back up. Casually, he hitched the hem and went under the skirt onto my thigh. Thankfully, Tommy returned just then and Stan moved his hand back down to my knee.

End quote.

• • •

I LOVE it. 100% my kind of wife sex story.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY.

Quote:

Another drink. He's kissing me with his hand full on my breast, but between us so it's hidden. Still, it must be visible. The bouncer for the club, really a burly security guard in a tux, comes up behind us and whispers to me that we ought to get a room. "I haven't seen you in here before, honey, but if you aren't a little more subtle about it, you won't be allowed to work in here again. If you don't want to be persona non grata right now, then take your business to a more suitable place." I can't believe it! The guy thinks that I'm a hooker, and that Stan is my trick! Then I realize that there were a number of hookers in the bar, and that most of them were probably much better-behaved...

End quote.

• • •

This story is very very erotic. The same goes for the Series.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I am copy pasting another user's comment.

Quote:

Anonymous over 1 year ago

❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ (5)!

If Stan were my wife's boss, she would shed her inhibitions in short order.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

5.0 = 100%!

AnonymousAnonymous6 days ago

👍👍!

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