All Comments on 'Convention Town Girl Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Why do the idiots

read these kinds of stories and then post about the sanctity of marriage, etc. Marriage is not a one size fits all and as long as both partners know what is going on and consent then that is what they want their marriage to be. I thought the story was hot and wanted to post a positive comment to offset the drivel from the troll.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
To offset the last comment.

Stupid story about stupid people doing stupid things. And to the last commentator? marriage IS a one size fits all, That's why it's called a Marriage contract. If you break the conditions of the contract then the contract should be terminated. Of course swingers and people with open marriages don't care what the contract says or means, it means nothing to them. I would guess your one of those people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Last commentor missing the most important point

People can have very different marriage contracts. Oven marriages can be by contract between the two people. There is not only one type of marriage contract. People are free in this country to develop their marriages in many forms.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice!

You are invited to my party anytime.

Orion623Orion623over 14 years ago
Nice Little Series

A fun story although the plot device of Stan as a 'Big Client' to be allowed any liberty is becoming a bit tedious.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Predictable & boring!

There is more excitement on a fortune cookie slip of paper than this sad excuse of an effort. Try some twists and try to make it sort of interesting to review. D & W

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well,that is what happen when someone cannot write a damn !!!

It is just a mindless drivel produced by mindless "author". What do you expect??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
LOVE IT: *****- (5-). This is a fuck fest porn story & a love story, 2-in-1! (Her husband Tommy loves her unconditionally & selflessly!)

:-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 [5 (4.75/5=95%)]!

:-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I first became aware of my voyeur side when i was 27 & my wife was 22. As a layman, I guess my voyeur side was somewhere inside my psyche: it was dormant or latent or suppressed.

My wife @ I were invited to an outdoor party at a huge farm house property on the outskirts of our city. My wife wore Daisy Dukes & cropped T-shirt. We all ate around sunset. There was a sizeable campfire in the middle of the back yard.

My wife went behind the barn to smoke a joint. After she stayed for 20 minutes, I went to look for her. From behind a bush & a storage building, I saw a guy & my wife sitting on a bench, he was whispering something in her ear while caressing her thighs.

I felt i was struck by lightning, was in a state of shock, totally paralysed, unable to think clearly. My eyes & my mind were glued to the scene i was watching. All in all i was in a hypnotic trance of a kind. Then I started to think to myself, "her thighs are really sexy... I am sure there is an explanation for all that I saw... I should not make a scene..." So i went back to near the campfire.

She came back 5 min. after me. Told me she talked with so and so, who had some "Afghani hashish", more potent than our weed, she smoke a joint of that stuff too. They exchanged cell numbers. He will invite us to his parents' cottage. She said she was sure I would like him."We could invite him when we throw a party... if that's fine with you." I never told her I saw her on the bench.

That night we came home late yet we had sex that night & in the morning. She was turning me on more than ever before.

I had stopped loving her, yet she was turning me on more & more.

24 months later to a day she left me for another man.

:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

My kind of wife sex story. Bravio! 5.0 (100%).

You managed to tell us a complete story on less than a page.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Erotic, kinky, funny ha ha, even romantic,

all in one. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… (5). My kind of wife sex story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Bravo! This is a FUCKFEST (in my book that is a compliment)!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

(1) Re anon over a year ago:

all's well that ends well.

(2) This is a five star story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it: 5.0 (*****)!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very very erotic. True to life too. I gave you a 5.0 = 100% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟!)

I became aware of my own voyeur side while I was married to my first wife. When I first saw her groped & caressed by another guy I simply froze, i was paralysed to act or think; I was in a hypnotic trance of sorts... I never told my wife that I had seen her. I never confronted my wife over that. I soon stopped thinking about that. It was as though my brain had relegated that memory to a back burner. (That was not the only incident of the kind.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

β€πŸ’šβ€πŸ’šβ€ (five)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘! ❀!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

In my book this is a five star story..

The author managed to tell us a lot on a single page: e.g. the heroine gets fucked by 3 men that day.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

As bad as the Loosescrews' stories are, at least they never stooped to using Jamal or Marcus. I'll give them a *4 for that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (five)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (five)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If my wife worked for Stan, I would be on cloud number nine 24/7.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This Loving Wife story was brilliantly conceived and masterfully crafted.

* * *

Re anon comment "If my wife worked for Stan..."

I LOVE above comment. As I am reading Convention Town Girl series, I identify with Tommy and my wife works for Stan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very very sexy and kinky. Loved it: 5.0 (*****!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I LOVED this chapter!

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The protaginist of the series is Jen. She is a keeper.

Excerpt from Ch. 5:

"... So I stand there frozen while, for the next minute, she runs two fingers in and out of me and pinches my clit. She tells me how hot and wet I am, how slippery inside, what a nice cunt, what a fine piece I must be and how many guys are going to get into this cunt tonight. I am weak in the legs from the erotic heat of her touch. She is almost nibbling on my ear while her fingers slide into my lips and hole and rub my clit. 'I know you're an amateur, honey,' she hisses, 'and that makes me want this even more. I'll get you later.' ..."

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

β€πŸ’šβ€πŸ’šβ€

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘! Very erotic. Entertaining. With a touch of kink! GropeFest.

She loves her husband, but she wishes that Stan become a part of her life. She enjoys his company in more ways than one.

β€πŸ’šβ€πŸ’šβ€ (5.0).

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My kind of wife sex story.

Several men had sex with her in 24 hours, but only two of them meant something to her: her husband and their boss Stan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

β€πŸ’šβ€πŸ’šβ€ (5.0 = 100%)

If I worked for Stan, I would encourage my wife to have sex with him.

What happens at the convention stays at the convention.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Women both married and single choose not to say No to men like Stan. It is hard to tell what it is. They do not want men like Stan to replace their husbands.

Tommy's wife knows that Stan is their major client. But she hopes he will be a part of her life.

I would say that apart from his alpha personality, he is essentially a nice guy who is fun to be with; I am sure she LOVES to have sex with him.

β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… (5.0).

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If a guy like Stan fucked my wife I would be i 7th heaven and on cloud number nine at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Having read all 6 chapters, I feel I would be happy to share my wife with Stan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very very erotic. Teasonably true to life.

Gave it a 5.0 (β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… = 100%!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Copy pasting someone else's comment:

"Anon - about 1 month ago

If a guy like Stan fucked my wife,

I would be in 7th heaven

and on cloud number nine

at the same time."

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved this Chapter very much, gave you a 5+ (105%, β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†+ "above expectations.")

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Irresistibly dirty! In my book it's a compliment

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am re-posting another user's comment:

Quote: Anon - over 2 years ago

LOVE IT: *****- (5-). This is a fuck fest porn story & a love story, 2-in-1! (Her husband Tommy loves her unconditionally & selflessly!)

:-) End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

5.0 (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

πŸ’―

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯ (5)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

5.0 = πŸ’―% (β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†) πŸ‘πŸ‘!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very very erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Brilliant, a tour de force,

5.0 = 100% (β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†)!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I am copy pasting aΓ±other user's comment.

Quote:

Anonymous, over 2 years ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I first became aware of my voyeur side when i was 27 & my wife was 22. As a layman, I guess my voyeur side was somewhere inside my psyche: it was dormant or latent or suppressed.

My wife & I were invited to an outdoor party at a huge farm house property on the outskirts of our city. My wife wore Daisy Dukes & cropped T-shirt. We all ate around sunset. There was a sizeable campfire in the middle of the back yard.

My wife went behind the barn to smoke a joint. After she stayed for 20 minutes, I went to look for her. From behind a bush & a storage building, I saw a guy & my wife sitting on a bench, he was whispering something in her ear while caressing her thighs.

I felt i was struck by lightning, was in a state of shock, totally paralysed, unable to think clearly. My eyes & my mind were glued to the scene i was watching. All in all i was in a hypnotic trance of a kind. Then I started to think to myself, "her thighs are really sexy... I am sure there is an explanation for all that I saw... I should not make a scene..." So i went back to near the campfire.

She came back 5 min. after me. Told me she talked with so and so, who had some "Afghani hashish", more potent than our weed, she smoke a joint of that stuff too. They exchanged cell numbers. He will invite us to his parents' cottage. She said she was sure I would like him."We could invite him when we throw a party... if that's fine with you." I never told her I saw her on the bench.

That night we came home late yet we had sex that night & in the morning. She was turning me on more than ever before.

I had stopped loving her, yet she was turning me on more & more.

24 months later to a day she left me for another man.

:)

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent: β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… (5.0)!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excerpt from the story.

Quote:

... I was certainly expecting that he would take advantage of his position, and of me, sometime during the party. His hands are all over me. I try to keep him away from my breasts so that he doesn't mess up the costume in an obvious way. That's okay with him. He reaches under my skirt. He pulls it up and forces his hand into my pants and stockings.

We roll them down so he can get at my pussy, and then into me. His favorite thing, putting his fingers in my pussy, making me hot and wet ...

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜† (5.0)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5 of 5 = 100% (β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excerpt from Ch. 5 (some FF action.)

Quote:

... So I stand there frozen while, for the next minute, she runs two fingers in and out of me and pinches my clit. She tells me how hot and wet I am, how slippery inside, what a nice cunt, what a fine piece I must be and how many guys are going to get into this cunt tonight. I am weak in the legs from the erotic heat of her touch. She is almost nibbling on my ear while her fingers slide into my lips and hole and rub my clit. 'I know you're an amateur, honey,' she hisses, 'and that makes me want this even more. I'll get you later.' ...

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Jen is a KEEPER. Full stop. Period.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Stan's da man!

If he is your client he will fuck your wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I want Stan to fuck my wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

As a rule I love boss-fucks-wife stories.

The Convention Town Girl series is one of my favorite: I find it very very erotic and true to life.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This story gets a 5.0 = πŸ’―% (β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†)!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This is a FIVE STAR STORY!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I AM COPY PASTING THIS COMMENT BECAUSE I CAN REALLY RELATE TO IT.

Quote:

Anonymous, over 1 year ago

My kind of wife sex story.

Several men had sex with her in 24 hours, but only two of them meant something to her: her husband and their boss Stan.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY

(SPOILER ALERT!)

Quote:

Tommy's dick is so hard he can barely stand up. Stan's, too. When I get up off his lap, he has to cover his hard-on. He smells his fingers and then wipes them off with a napkin. Guess he doesn't like to eat other men's semen.

As I stand up, I have to put one foot down before the other and anyone who is looking gets quite a view of my crotch up my skirt. With no panties hiding anything, just the sheer pantyhose, my bush is broadcast to the room.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

5 [4.75 = 95% = A+ (β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†)].

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I am copy pasting this comment bacause I really liked it.

Quote:

Anonymous, 2 months ago

Stan's da man!

If he is your client he will fuck your wife.

End qur

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Irresistibly erotic, kinky, and funny.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great chapter, especially the lesbo scene. My wife has been there and done that!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

What's the point of having Tommy (hubby) around? His wife does all the work to get clients & business. At best, he's just a chauffeur. Cheaper to simply rent a limo service.

Hire wifey - fire hubby. Wifey divorce hubby - just a useless appendage; like appendix or hemorrhoids or fetus or MiLs.

Mind you, why anybody would want to fuck an old used cunt with that kind of mileage is beyond me. It's like you keep wearing an old shoe that's scuffed, faded, stinks, heavily infected with bacteria & viruses, holes in both soles, at least one heel missing altogether - fuck! Have some self-respect! Buy a new pair of shoes!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

IRRESISTIBLY EROTIC!

Jen is a lo ing wife and a keeper. Full stop.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

5β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

BRAVO! BRAVISSIMO! 5.0 = 100%.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I am surprised that there wasn't more sex in this situation. Instead all the guys just faded away and she went back to the room with her husband.

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

5.0 = 100%!

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Excerpt from the story.

Quote:

... not bad for an old married couple. We just need the right kind of stimulation.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

I want Stan to fuck my wife; in the best case scenario to do it before my very eyes.

MrMsScrewLoose, thank you for this story!)

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

I am copy pasting someone else's comment.

Anonymous over 2 years ago

Very very erotic. True to life too. I gave you a 5.0 = 100% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟!)

I became aware of my own voyeur side while I was married to my first wife. When I first saw her groped & caressed by another guy I simply froze, i was paralysed to act or think; I was in a hypnotic trance of sorts...

I never told my wife that I had seen her. I never confronted my wife over that. I soon stopped thinking about that. It was as though my brain had relegated that memory to a back burner. (That was not the only incident of the kind.)

AnonymousAnonymous10 days ago

5.0 = πŸ’―% (β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†), πŸ‘πŸ‘.

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