All Comments on 'Convincing My Wife'

Wimpish story

one of the worst ever!

Another braindead author This is non erotic

racist crap. do everyone a favor and quit writing.

The story started off ok, but went rapidly downhill and became stupid and senseless.

Author:

For a story to be erotic, and for you to get scores above 3, you need to make us readers feel part of your story. But your unrealistic characters act in ways people just don't, turns us off.

This should have been categorized as non-consent, or rape, not Loving Wives. The perversion of this husband to "convince" his wife to spread her charms by dominating, beating and forcing her to let his friends rape her is pretty disagreeable, even disgusting.

Saw you name voted 1 star no point reading your story.

Dunno what the others mean - awesome, more please!!

I don't find crude stories like this sexy.No woman would enjoy this kind of stupid treatment.Not sexy at all.

Loved it... i want a hubby like hers... I want that good end gangbang and being treated like that first time when he brought over his friends.

Thanks for this!! I really enjoyed it!

How is this erotic, loving wives or exciting. Only to a sick mind. Even those in into dom games would work at it more. This is wife abuse and rape even if she consents later. Hubby and friends need to be in jail.

This sharing/slut/whore-wife concept (especially with nigs) along with the cuckold wimp fetish are the two sickest, dumbest ideas promulgated by Lit writers. Over the 20-plus years I've read Lit and other erotica, if the opportunity presents itself after I encounter this sort of trash, I've polled - not poled, LOL - one or more men and women (married, single, friends, strangers) for comment. In all but maybe few cases and quite contrary to the claims of writers that it's "so popular almost every guy wants their wife/gf to participate and every wife/gf fantasizes about it..... ESPECIALLY with nwords" they say it's disgusting, revolting and they'd end a relationship if their spouse or partner even hinted at it.

While some of those women I asked admitted to having rape fantasies, even they say it's merely fantasy, they'd never actually want to be a victim of abuse at the hands of friends or strangers much less be raped. A few divorced folks sheepishly admitted that bringing it up in hopes of "spicing things up in the bedroom" ended on a slippery slope that led to increasing depravity and hedonism and finally divorce. This is so strikingly different than the reactions I get when asking them about other erotic genre (e.g., 3-somes in college, bi-curious stuff, golden showers, lite bondage) I don't think it's just a case that everyone is too shy to admit they're into really sick sex play.

So, keep jerking your puds over these fringe fetishes, especially the crap propaganda that's written by frustrated blacks in prisons trying to convince every white guy how "fun" it would be to share the wife. Then, if you're stupid enough to take the next step, you'll likely BE divorced soon thereafter and well-prepared for a lot of lonely nights with a Fleshlight.

My, the previous anon took a poll about how people prefer their poles, I guess. Once again: fiction = fantasy = not real. Is it so hard to imagine? Lighten up or read somewhere else, perhaps.

Abuse, rape, wife sharing. You hit all the low points, and you promise more? No thanks.

Didn't take much convincing to turn this bitch into a.whore. Even brought good old Leroy, the mythical bbc, to totally degrade her. You suck.

Your wife is lucky to have you.

How dare you promote wife abuse, we will give an ass like you the world. You go and write a story like this sure every woman has a fantasies about other men with her but this sucks. You sick fuck.

Annie

too contrived

I liked the total fantasy of a wife becoming a complete slut and whore for her husband. Not believable at all, but nicely written.