All Comments on 'Coquine'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sweet

Great work! I liked it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
God,...

...Whores ain't got nothing on HER!

Strangely_EnoughStrangely_Enoughabout 15 years ago
That was...

Mmmh, that was...really good =]

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
You're looking for more that a quick fuck.

I liked this. It sounds like you are looking for more than a good fuck, though. Sounds more like what you want is a relationship or something like "love" with a good fuck attached to it.

Lil_kittyLil_kittyover 13 years ago

Wow, this was seriously hot :) Great story. Can we expect more of Jenn's adventures?

Kat0511Kat0511about 13 years ago
Hot and realistic

You've done an excellent job setting the scene, providing just enough detail for the reader without going into a long explanation about the boyfriend. The annoying roommate who won't leave them alone is a really nice touch. Great dialogue. Really hot.

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