by Eroticdreamescape
....for your feedback. It's so very much appreciated! Xo
I think you should continue on. You write so well that I always want to read more at the end. I'm a big fan of your writing and stories. Please continue!
Really enjoyed this story. Would love to know what happened next. very arousing
oh to have a chance to do that omg your writings are the best
You paint a compelling, sexy picture with your writing. I see you have decided not to continue this tale. It stands on its own, but I wouldn't mind learning what happens if they have another chance meeting.