All Comments on 'Council of Elders Ch. 01'

lol, its kinda funny when 6'4 240lbs is considered a runt... interesting development b/t Fenrir & Caeser(sp?), like the whole mind-merge thing. am also interested in seeing how you bring Fenrir & Owen together & the two Elders next move... and just what was the curse Caeser placed upon them?

Hmm...I like it bc it is original. So many of the werewolf stories are very similar. I love the whole mind meld thing of Caesar and Fenris.

That elder who killed Caesar...wow, what a bastard. I am wondering how he thought killing Caesar would bring the hunters? Was it a coincidence that he sent his consciousness to a hunter? Why do the hunters have such high psychic abilities or whatever that has drawn Caesar's magic causing them pain? Or do all werewolves/supernaturals have those abilities? Why didn't Owen sense it? And when Fenris has a relationship that is gonna get wierd with Caesar there too!

I really like the story and can't wait to see where you take it.

For someone who hasn't planned this story, and is writing as you think, I think this is going to be a really cool series!

Owen's adoptive parents are adorable! And the rest of the story is trotting along swimmingly. Great stuff!

Okay, so I don't have one of those fancy schmancy frenchy keyboards!! lemme alone, will ya? Love the series, love the writing, and yes... Owen's parents are brilliant. Not too sure about the character of Ceaser though, he's a bit funny! Hah!............ I made a, (yeah, never mind!)