All Comments on 'Country Girl: The Beginning'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
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I liked the writing style as it seems like something that would be found in a journal or a diary (i.e. little asides). I would have liked for there to be more sex scenes but as this was the introduction to a multipart story, I can understand why there was not.

As for the part-per-day idea, if the quality remains fairly high, then I think it will work fine.

Lastly, thanks for writing and sharing your work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
yes please

A day at a time would be great. What a lovely fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

great do it day by day just keep it coming and soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I liked the part of they including a tattoo. Every sissy should have at least a tramp stamp on her back.

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 5 years ago
a little bit of a choppy start

it should be a good story.

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