by LaurenWestley
I liked the writing style as it seems like something that would be found in a journal or a diary (i.e. little asides). I would have liked for there to be more sex scenes but as this was the introduction to a multipart story, I can understand why there was not.
As for the part-per-day idea, if the quality remains fairly high, then I think it will work fine.
Lastly, thanks for writing and sharing your work!
I liked the part of they including a tattoo. Every sissy should have at least a tramp stamp on her back.