All Comments on 'Couple's New Toilet'

I'm not a member of the grammar or punctuation police but I'm assuming that English is not your first language because there are commas everywhere, in places they don't belong or where periods should be. It made what was a interesting story almost impossible to read and that's a shame. Perhaps an editor could assist because it isn't your imagination that's lacking.

Enjoyed the story so far, and looking forward to the continuation. But, just my opinion, I hope that Long doesn't shit on the kid. I think that "man scat" is a little too much.

I LOVEDDD IT IT WAS SOO FUJCKING NASTTTTTYYYY <333

Damn, that was nasty! And very good. 5 Stars! Loved it!

Captures the correct attitude of the dominant, especially as regards the objectification of the toilet slave.

Awesome story, hope there is another part Thanx

please next party !!

Hallo W-T!

I would have loved reading this story,,, if only you had written as a (Lesbian Fetish) and left out all of the fucken men!

If you're interested to see how many stars I gave you, go to (message to the author in this box).

Gay Kat.

Loved your story; got me really horny; would like to read more.

Nice idea for a story, but I couldn’t read to the end because of the many grammar and syntax errors.

It would be good to have a native English speaker proof-read your text.

My husband and I are in a cuckold relationship, and a FLM. I do use my husband as a toilet, both drinking my urine and eating my turd as it come out of my ass. He also uses his tongue as a tampon, licking my menstrual blood and swallowing it as well. I am very fortunate to have him as my husband.

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