by PheeGee
I loved this story!lol You did a great job with it. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
I laughted all the way thru this!! Hope to see more! Cute title, by the way :)
I'd love to read more about these characters. What a great group!
*wince* I neglected to mention at the top of the story that this is an entry for the 2010 Nude day contest... but I imagine the dangly bits swaying to and fro probably gave that away. :)
Thanks everyone for all the votes and comments so far. I had a blast writing this, and I am pleased to know it made someone other than myself giggle a time or two.
I love this story.. you are feeding my secret pleasure!!! Write more!
This was a cute story, and I enjoyed reading, although it's really not my main thing. I did wonder, though, why Austin was fantasizing about topping Craig, when he is apparently a bottom. Or is he versatile?
Boxlicker101,
Thank you for the comment.
I am pretty sure you are talking about the scene in the bar because when I wrote it I was concerned it would read wrong. I should have followed my instinct and spent a little more time editing the wording on that part. He meant riding him as a bottom, not topping him.
I don't think the bar scene and Austin's fantasy of riding Craig was a problem... I got it on the first read. But then, coming from the prospective of Amanda/Jerry, I may read everybody as versatile...
I loved it. Penis hats... too funny. Good luck with the contest.
I love your writing style! It's so nice to read stories where characters actually have personalities. It's also really hot to read a story like this where the characters aren't ashamed or secretive about the sex. They're just there to have fun! I love it!!!
For me, this was the hottest read of the contest. The sex was great, but the fun non-cookie cutter personalities kicked it up a notch. I would enjoy more of these dudes, or maybe even more fun lovable guys you might have roaming around in your mind? Thanks, and good luck in the contest. :)
I don't know anything about contests (I'm really new to this site), but I hope you won. This story was hilariously sexy, and I'd I love it if you came up with more stories featuring Craig and Austen. And as far as the bar scene goes, I got it on the first read, too. I also really love the title.
--Soulless
Fun ride and well written, plus a cheeky cowboy, mutual attraction and hot sex. What more could we ask for? No need for more chapters - but more new stories would be great.