All Comments on 'Crafting a Love Affair'

Woohoo, you finished it! I loved it. It made me vibrate, my energy rise, and feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Gotta love a man on the same wavelength as yourself (and sometimes one that can read minds might be helpful, too)! *LOL*

(Not sure what is going on with disappearing comments: I posted to your Fall Lovin' last week and its gone. Hope this comment doesn't disappear too.)

~Luna

This story has it all - interesting concept, well developed characters, nice pacing and a great descriptive element and tone. Incredibly well written! - Litfan10

liked it...keep writing, good idea but i think you can maybe incorperate the characters into the love scene more. Loved the tempo and the suspense.

Loved the concept, your creativity and the way it played out was fabulous. I also really liked the fact that you made us wait to finally "see" them together but it was well worth the wait! I can't wait to read more of your work, 2 thumbs up!!!

I enjoyed the story. The only thing I would have liked to see would have been for you to take us into the coven meeting and let us see more about what she would be doing. I think you could definitely continue their story. I'd love to know more about Jack's abilities and why he has them and to see their relationship develop. Though she felt love right away they still would need to get to know each other and maybe their powers could work together. Hope you consider continuing the story.

I love this story.

I’ve reread this a few times now.

Thank you!