All Comments on 'Craigslist Girl'

Caught between short and longer story, Sexie. Good start and middle, but end, not so much. Need to complete the premise you started. If Roxy promises to do Toni more, why the sudden rush to finish? The guys were unnecessary and added nothing to the story. You are a sexy, hot, and solid writer (based on other stories), but this isn't your best effort.