All Comments on 'Crashing with Alice Ch. 01'

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Rawmaster50Rawmaster50about 9 years ago
5 stars for sinister beginnings

Well, I think someone is getting so payback for bring ignored when she was younger. Her seduction techniques are superb. She could have me any time she wanted! Excellent story right now, waiting for the rest of these adventures.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 9 years ago
Great

Oh what a dream, great start for a few more I hope, loved how fast it was but hope that it is paced out a bit in the future .

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 9 years ago
Great start!

Very sensual description, great job!

tallmtredtallmtredover 8 years ago
All of my fantasies!

You managed to include all of my fantasies in one story: dominant woman, a friend who finally acts and a nerdy redhead. More please!

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