All Comments on 'Craving'

Wow - the intensity of this is just palpable. If you decide to continue that would make me happy. :-)

Tremendous job capturing the burning intensity of raw lust/desire/passion. Erotic and hot as hell. Beautifully written.

I hope there is another chapter.

chapter 2, please

WOW!you got my toes curling. If there's a second part to this looking forward to it,

Great piece.

And intenesly sexy! Great job, hope there's another chapter in the works.

What a rare type of story, I absolutely love it!!! Your writing style is breathtaking so please don't take too long with the next chapter. Absolutely amazing! P.S. if you're ever in NY I know 7 women who would kill to have that agreement with you ♡♡♡♡xx

I hope there's more to this story!! That was so intense and reminds me of past trysts and need. Your writing is amazing. I loved every moment of this!

That was incredible! Please Please Please write more

That is exactly how I feel when taste my loves sweet pussy! It was like you were in my brain! What a turn on. I especially liked the wordage and phrasing. WELL DONE!!!

You said at the outset that you're new to the writing game. It sure as hell doesn't read that way. If you are a newcomer, you should be absolutely brilliant when you've been writing for a few years. Congratulations on a fine piece of work.

...eating pussy I've ever read! You must love what you do.

I'm CRAVING more of this story!!!

This story provided me with my first g-spot orgasm... Very sexy.

This turned me on incredibely, doesnt read at all like your new to writing! The wording is absolutely spectacular and plus it made my pussy gush. fantastic job

Your story was tenacious, deliberate and seductivly well written. I was not only wet half way through but my mouth was watering as well. I loved the tease as your roommate started to approached her orgasums. I have those wicked thoughts often as I service my boss. It's the ultamte high of looking up across her hardened nipples as the rush of a stronger orgasum caused by my fluttering tongue, closes her eyes and starts her body to convulse. Yes, I'm the one who crawls across her office floor to service her so I know how frustrating a one way relationship can be. But, I also never feel more powerful than when my boyfriends' eyes fill with lust as l lift my hips to meet his tongue. Please keep writing Between LAL

It was well written and certainly conveyed the urgency of the title. I would have liked to see a bit more story, but it really worked for what it was. My only writing suggestions are that there were a couple of places where you needed to ease off on the adjectives. There was also one place where an unintended alliteration distracted me... plump pleasure something.

I also must congratulate you and/or your editor on the most error free read I think I have ever had on Literotica.

Your description of how she attempted to separate herself from the tongue that was ravaging her was so Vivid.

So good!!

Fuck Fuck Fuckity Fuck!!! OMG, THIS SHIT IS PRIMAL!

That was some intensely satisfying pussy eating! Oh my God.

Such intensity! it read like a vampire story filled with a burning, relentless, ravenous hunger. Wonderful--thanks for posting.

The opening paragraphs of this story, where her addiction is described, provides what may be the hottest introduction to a story that I have ever seen on this site. It is the perfect lead-in to an excellent story. Well done!!

Thank you. THANK...YOU for writing this. HOLY.FUCK!

WHEW!

What a session...!

Have read of such an arrangement, never seen written about in Lit before, and SO well too!

No surprise they're both crashed rabbits afterwards

EASY five and fave, and fantastic there's a Ch. 02...easy entrant into my all-time best folder

Seemingly the thin walls no inhibition to them....