All Comments on 'Crawl'

That may have been the most amazing thing I've ever read.

Good short story, in fact it's really good. Emotions depicted beautifully. I wanted to know more though, who are they, how did they get to this point in time? I longer story in the future perhaps.........thank you.

Thanks for your feedback :) All feedback will be taken into account and used to improve on future stories/writing. I'm glad you liked it.

Outstanding. The conflict within the woman makes the story. My compliments on the smooth way you handle second person POV - very hard to do well.

I love that you had the courage to share your work with the world hunny thank you for being the awesome human you are up be waiting for more stories and fun

This must have been a great sexting night and it is a wonderful story. I love the BDSM stories that include the desire vs denial without the harsh degrading content. It is surely enough to suffer public nudity and spanking without the namecalling etc. Simply loved it and it is sooooo hott.

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