All Comments on 'Crazy Insane Glory Hole Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wicked!

In every sense of the word.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice nice

I enjoy it a lot, please write another chapter much longer than that one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
rethink some of your

The author needs to seriously rethink some of the terms and sentence structure. Forget the crap cell phone test message stuff as many don't know or understand it; and besides there is ample space to fully type out the words.

PSLibraBalancePSLibraBalanceover 14 years ago
Hot Hot Hot!!!

Really liked your story. I hope you continue.

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
I ENJOYED IT THOROUGHLY!

I thought it was just an outstanding little incest tale. I hope you write many more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
VERY HOT

THIS STORY IS VERY HOT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I like your stories.

Keep on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Where can I find this kind of clinic?

I found this to be very intriguing and have to know where I can find a place like in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Weak concept about the clinic

This one was very rushed and the clinic was a total ass-pull. Also, how come sis was so familiar with how his scar would look?

You needed to build the story a bit first so it's not just any two horny young people screwing in a backseat after their accidental BJ hookup. Best leave this one as an insane idea that doesn't quite work. Keep posting though. Thanks

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenabout 11 years ago
Weird

A good setting but a bit rushed and how would the sister know he has a scar on his dick in the first place >.>

SiodisSiodisabout 11 years ago
Brilliant!

Would definitely love to see more chapters of this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
To VictorDoUrden

Because he fell and hit his dick on the table in front of his family. I'm sure after that, they all knew he'd had to get stitches.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

Great story but the ending was weak, sorry.

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