All Comments on 'Cricket'

I have no idea if this is a good story or not. I couldn't get past the completely unrealistic, porn movie setup for the sex. Ugh, ugh and ugh!

Stupid

Thank you

This did not work for me. But it could work for some people good story though. It takes a lot to write a story. Good attempt.

Thanks for sharing!

Very sweet very sensuous and Emma shows her readers her sense of humour. Another gem from Emma, would've Ben been rewarded with if it were a Lion? How come I never met any girls like Cricket? I guess I'll just have to keep reading Emma's amazing stories for pointers. Thank you Emma!