All Comments on 'Crimson Sky Ch. 02'

Interesting...can't wait to see what happens next.

Cheers! (:

please

I like it, my only critique is they are really short, a little longer would be a nice improvement.

Now I'm intrigued. More please

Too much of a tease. It's great but

It should continue a little bit further into the scene. It's just too short so try to submit a longer chapter. It has me hooked

Your story has got a lot of potential. I can see it really going places. Good cliffhangers that will keep readers wanting to know more. I do have to agree with the others, the chapters are too short. Expand on the characters more and their reactions to each other. All in all, it's an enjoyable read. Keep going.

I'm sorry about the delay on ch.3 and I promise I'm working on getting it submitted asap

This is good i like it. Intriged about the doc? Cant wait for num 3. As for length just do what u want