All Comments on 'Cristina's Re-birth'

love story. I believe that you touched all of the bases to tell this story and to do it well. Ronnie W.

two damaged people come together, a woman isolated by her beauty and a man isolated by his fear and workaholism.

sweet.

Your story is extraordinary! You present the entire progression of ideas and events with the same polish and class you attribute to the lady in the story. In doing so with such care and concern for her, you depict with clarity and conviction the ascendency of emotion and involvement in each other in intimacy over the physical acts taken in isolation. Very well done.

OH MY GOD!!!!! This is an immensley romantic yet erotoic story that would appeal to any woman. This is every working womans dream and if you differ then you are probably lying. Kudos to you my dear friend. I love you heart and soul.

you portrayed one of the things hardley anyone duplicates well in their stories human emoution this is by far one of the best stories ive read.

Show us don't tell us. The total narration was numbing and boring.

I know that this web site is a haven for fantasy, but sometimes it's hard to get into a story that's so unlikely that it doesn't work. Here we have a wimp who is too shy to talk to this gorgeous creature who secretly respects him because he doesn't hit on her like everyone else. She's also completely inexperienced in dealing with men because of excessively protective parents. And then after her divorce she comes to this paragon, who by the way has gotten promoted to running a large group of people in just 2 years, asks him for a job (without going through HR???) and during a highly unlikely business trip she confesses her innermost secrets and tells about her secret love for him. Far fetched? Absolutely! Fantasy??? Definitely! Worth reading??Maybe so!

is at it again. Damning with faint praise. That’s about as good as anyone will get from him/her. Enjoy it Goshawk.